After the events of the bloodstone scepter Spike finds himself surprisingly as the new Dragon Lord. Not only that but his three friends Twilight, Rarity and Ember are now also fighting for his love!
I initially hoped Rarity and Twilight would become some sorts of Queen since they are Spike's mates. Now my idea of Fashionista Dragon Queen is crashed. (It would be hilarious if Rarity could force dragons to wear dress with her Queen position) Does this mean a dragon's mate not necessary tie to a single male?
To be fair, while these ideas are interesting, they might contradict a tad the prequel of this story. Rarity was written more promiscuous and less dominant back then, so changing it up might seem strange.
I am aware of the difference, but things can always slip through on accident. Heck, I can't expect my Editor to find every little thing. Anyway, could you point me towards the sentence that is missing the comma? I could take care of it then!
9727325 I can try. Let's see... This chapter, we have
“I am here to serve you today my lord,” the mare said in a noble accent, bowing demurely.
“You did very well my maid,” he complimented with a grin, before snaking a claw under her dress on her cutie-mark clad butt, giving it a hard grope, and making her moan out.
“You know darling, mhmmm, I doubt you will find a more *slurp* sophisticated mouth than mine for this.
“O-Of course not my lord!” she added dramatically, turning her head to push her maw around the side of his cock, continuing her noisy slurps. Spike was quite sure that red lipstick would leave some nice raunchy marks on his cock.
“I-I’m on it my lord!” she replied a bit panicky, something that made Spike’s cock twitch.
“T-That was the only pony outfit m-my lord! I-It really isn’t like that!”
“I-I’m sorry my lord!” she apologized, moaning as the naughty mare couldn’t hold her voice back even without him thrusting.
“I-I’m so sorry my lord for being such a huge slut!” the mare whined much to Spike’s delight as he grinned.
Spike couldn’t help but laugh slightly, “No problem dude.”
“Thank you my Spikey-Wikey! I really needed that. Not to mention that this fabric test was a full success as well! It does keep most cum inside, while letting a smaller part still seep through it at the same time.
“Yes darling. You are in a perfect condition. I suppose that is the only good thing about your...training,” she groused as she went for the big dresser on the right side.
“There. All perfect and ready for your court your highness,” Rarity said with a bow, her eyes shining happily.
“Thanks Rarity. You are the best!” he complimented. These words he so often said in the past even now held true. She was always there for him.
I initially hoped Rarity and Twilight would become some sorts of Queen since they are Spike's mates. Now my idea of Fashionista Dragon Queen is crashed. (It would be hilarious if Rarity could force dragons to wear dress with her Queen position) Does this mean a dragon's mate not necessary tie to a single male?
Would have thought that Spike left Rarity all for himself... still pretty hot.
Come on, TOWAN, you should be experienced enough to remember: Comma before the names when characters address one another in dialogue.
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To be fair, while these ideas are interesting, they might contradict a tad the prequel of this story. Rarity was written more promiscuous and less dominant back then, so changing it up might seem strange.
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I am aware of the difference, but things can always slip through on accident. Heck, I can't expect my Editor to find every little thing. Anyway, could you point me towards the sentence that is missing the comma? I could take care of it then!
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Yeah, I understand. Still, Sparity fics are rare, so we cherish what little we can find.
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I can try. Let's see... This chapter, we have