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TheOneWithoutAName


Towan for short

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Before reading story: GOOD DAMN IT! I was going to use this pick for one of my upcoming one shots! :fluttercry: There goes that art.

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What! oh come on. images have been used multiple times in the past. If it speaks to the story, use it.

Nice, can't wait to see what Rarity has for him.

I'm sorry but, does Spike look like Dracula when he holds the scepter?

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Lucky you! In four to five hours you will find out as she has the next chapter! :raritywink:

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Thanks! It is great to be back! :yay:

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Good! We still have three chapters to go! :pinkiesmile:

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Not quite sure what you mean. Is it because of the cape in the image? Spike is supposed to look like a more grown-up version like in the image.

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Yep it's the cape in the image, cause every time a clop happens i laughed cause i imagine him biting the girls cartoonishly
"Yes! Drain me master!"
:rainbowlaugh:

I initially hoped Rarity and Twilight would become some sorts of Queen since they are Spike's mates. Now my idea of Fashionista Dragon Queen is crashed. (It would be hilarious if Rarity could force dragons to wear dress with her Queen position) Does this mean a dragon's mate not necessary tie to a single male?

Would have thought that Spike left Rarity all for himself... still pretty hot.

Come on, TOWAN, you should be experienced enough to remember: Comma before the names when characters address one another in dialogue.

Remember: There's a difference between

"I want to come inside Rainbow Dash!"

and

"I want to come inside, Rainbow Dash!"

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To be fair, while these ideas are interesting, they might contradict a tad the prequel of this story. :twilightsheepish: Rarity was written more promiscuous and less dominant back then, so changing it up might seem strange.

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I am aware of the difference, but things can always slip through on accident. Heck, I can't expect my Editor to find every little thing. Anyway, could you point me towards the sentence that is missing the comma? I could take care of it then! :yay:

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Yeah, I understand. Still, Sparity fics are rare, so we cherish what little we can find.

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I can try. Let's see... This chapter, we have

“I am here to serve you today my lord,” the mare said in a noble accent, bowing demurely.

“You did very well my maid,” he complimented with a grin, before snaking a claw under her dress on her cutie-mark clad butt, giving it a hard grope, and making her moan out.

“You know darling, mhmmm, I doubt you will find a more *slurp* sophisticated mouth than mine for this.

“O-Of course not my lord!” she added dramatically, turning her head to push her maw around the side of his cock, continuing her noisy slurps. Spike was quite sure that red lipstick would leave some nice raunchy marks on his cock.

“I-I’m on it my lord!” she replied a bit panicky, something that made Spike’s cock twitch.

“T-That was the only pony outfit m-my lord! I-It really isn’t like that!”

“I-I’m sorry my lord!” she apologized, moaning as the naughty mare couldn’t hold her voice back even without him thrusting.

“I-I’m so sorry my lord for being such a huge slut!” the mare whined much to Spike’s delight as he grinned.

Spike couldn’t help but laugh slightly, “No problem dude.”

“Thank you my Spikey-Wikey! I really needed that. Not to mention that this fabric test was a full success as well! It does keep most cum inside, while letting a smaller part still seep through it at the same time.

“Yes darling. You are in a perfect condition. I suppose that is the only good thing about your...training,” she groused as she went for the big dresser on the right side.

“There. All perfect and ready for your court your highness,” Rarity said with a bow, her eyes shining happily.

“Thanks Rarity. You are the best!” he complimented. These words he so often said in the past even now held true. She was always there for him.

how about spike chose one of them for a mate. For a bad ending?

I adore this sort of happy and pleasant "willing sluttery/degradation" stuff!

What I want to see in the next chapter (if possible);
Spike! How dare you get married without telling me? :trollestia:
Spike! Ah thought yer will wait for us! -sniff- :applecry:
I think he is doing the harem thing like in one of Rarity's book. :unsuresweetie:
Can we join? :scootangel:
WEDDING PARTY!!! :pinkiecrazy:

wow you outdone yourself yet again.

Will you continue with other of your stories?

Hmm.. this is good, but is probably losing likes because of the super slut factor. Friends being slut is fine. Potentially mate/loves? Not so much!

Maybe that will change. Continue reading!:moustache:

Great story, enjoying it :3

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Possible, but I honestly can't imagine how to write such an ending. Or if people would really want such non-cannon endings here.

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Glad you like it! :yay:

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If there will be a sequel, it won't be for quite some time as I am planning to focus on my other projects for now. But it is always good to know that there are people interested in it, so I can take it into consideration for the future! :raritystarry:

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Sounds fun! :pinkiesmile: Albeit things might turn out more like this at first:

Celestia chuckled, “I see that your title is not only for show, Dragon Lord of Debauchery~”

“Conduct thineself properly Dragon Lord!” screamed a red-faced Luna.

“Dragon Lord of Debauchery.”

“Debaucherous or not, this reptile shall know how to showeth respect to US!!!”

Still your comment sounds interesting and is something I will consider.

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I worked a bit on Timberwolf Puppy Love, so yes, I am trying to get other stories besides the Commissions I'm working on done.

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Hm... That is an interesting insight. I thank you for it. Though it certainly isn't something I can or am willing to change. The prequel was about slut-like behavior so I wanted to stay true to it. Not to mention that I wanted to write a Slut Romance instead of a normal Romance. I believe we got enough normal Romance stories already on this site, so deviating from the norm is in my mind a good idea and helps administer some much needed variety.

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Hmmm, maybe Twilight will later publish 'A Guide to Safe Intercouse with a Dragon', which tempt Rainbow so much since she could not accept that the egghead know more about relationship than her.

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The waiting game! I do hope the herd increases in size especially if we know Spike's greed would make it happen or is it his lust? Which is it more infections greed or lust?

Imagine Spike as the new Mayor of Ponyville.....

Or just age up the CMC. Excellent work

“Yay! Friendship!” the lavender Alicorn cheered

Yay friendship indeed, Twilight. Yay friendship indeed.

I think adding a tiny extra touch of reality could make it even hotter. Like that they need to have something worthwhile to say. If they are just wasting time then they won't get to Twilight.

I just really like it when you combine hard logic with absurd porn.

Comment posted by Ricky Spanish deleted March 20th

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This is fantasy , not reality, you unimaginative dumbass. Also, they already got to Twilight in this chapter. Did you even read this story?

Dumbass.

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Also, nobody cares that you like logic with porn. If you want those kind of stories then write your own story.

Quit being lazy.

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I know it's fantasy. I just think you could up the tension a little. What I said about Twilight was a proposal as to how. That they need to do their say in a quick enough manner. If they do they get to have sex with Twilight.

I really love the idea here and I think making it more believable would take it even further.

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Just because you don't care about it doesn't mean that I'm not allowed to.

I'm just saying in what ways I think it could be improved further. Every story can be improved in some way. You don't have to agree with me but you also don't have to lash out like that.

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And why should anyone listen to you? You don’t have a single story written on this site. So your advice is more about what YOU want to see and not the author wants.

Selfish.

10139870 Once again, you have shown to me that you have no idea how relationships work in the real world.

You do realize in the real world, people pay others to have sex, right? Or sometimes they’re just people who have a casual sex relationship. The point is, people don’t have to have deep meaning garbage to get sex.

And your idea sounds just boring, uncreative and unrealistic. It sounds like something out a cheesy romance movie.

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I'm sure the author can decide for himself what to do.

Also I don't see where the criticism of yours is coming from. The scene itself wouldn't change, just the motivation would and be a little more legitimate. Here it's just sex being entirely separate from the overall plot. I also didn't say that the meaning had to be deep. Just that there had to be one in the first place. That within the story itself it serves a purpose.

If you think my solution is uncreative than do you know a better one?
Also please try to halt it with the insult throwing. It really makes you look bad.

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