Yo, this is a really promising start! I like the way you handle scenes, stuff feels very fleshed out and natural. The characters are nice, and Fine Silk is hitting the needed balance of hot and ominous. It's a bit too much of a prologue and set up for me to say that for sure this is great, but I am at leasted hooked enough to want to know if you can write the good stuff as well as you did this. Hope to see more soon!

So far so good. I'll track this for now and keep an eye on it

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Thank you so much for your feedback! It's very much appreciated. I do admit that the prologue felt quite clunky and too long, even for me. I just felt like if I'd started off with the introductory letter and then immediately transitioned to the interview, it might not have been organic.

I'm absolutely ecstatic that you consider Fine Silk to be balanced in those aspects right off the bat! And let's hope that I can do the good stuff well enough to feel engaging. I hope that the later chapters do not disappoint.

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Thank you for being willing to stick with it. I hope that the story continues to meet your expectations. :) Also, your username is a terrible pun and I absolutely love it.

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I'm surprised that no one thought of it before me

Always question stories with anthro tag busses must of the tinr it just an excuse for rhd author to mention boobs. Eye roll