I was just minding my own business in my room. TOTALLY not skimping on getting any writing done when I find myself in another world facing multiple choices, and what do you mean I'm not the one answering them!? (You choose what happens next!)
Interesting turn of events. I take it the main character Snowdrift will be having these bouts of insight about her characters behavior to prevent discovery, or as the story progresses, she picks up on her role better. I'm looking forward to more.
9249157 As long as it isn't several months between chapters take your time.
Though I do have one concern about the story concerning the method of interacting with the narrative. Perhaps its a bit meta, but with the players acting as an overridding outside force controlling a protagonist stripped of their identity and subjected to humiliating circumstances it says that Discord has once again regressed back into his former villanous ways as he did with Tirek.
9252735 Not sure about that. Discord is having fun yes, but Snowdrift isn't in any real danger, and well she's pretty obviously enjoying herself despite her objections.
I'm sure Fluttershy might be disappointed in Discord yes, but heartbroken seems a bit extreme.
Regardless I can basically say, being the author, that Snowdrift isn't as opposed to this as she may lead on.
Honestly it's a bit of a problem for me. I feel some might want to really see her struggle with being female, but to be blunt, I'm so sick and tired of seeing that in these kind of stories. Why can't the main character enjoy the crazy situation they've been thrown into for once?
Interesting turn of events. I take it the main character Snowdrift will be having these bouts of insight about her characters behavior to prevent discovery, or as the story progresses, she picks up on her role better. I'm looking forward to more.
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Well given how this type of story works, I'm not sure how to really go about that. We'll have to see how things develop.
Yeah! Democracy rocks!
Why is "all of the above" not an option? And I'm digging Skyla here ...
Id go with choce B.
Where's mah update!
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Snowdrift: It's coming! Looking this good takes time you know!
...N-Not that I'm trying to look pretty...
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As long as it isn't several months between chapters take your time.
Though I do have one concern about the story concerning the method of interacting with the narrative. Perhaps its a bit meta, but with the players acting as an overridding outside force controlling a protagonist stripped of their identity and subjected to humiliating circumstances it says that Discord has once again regressed back into his former villanous ways as he did with Tirek.
Why, Fluttershy would be utterly heartbroken.
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Not sure about that. Discord is having fun yes, but Snowdrift isn't in any real danger, and well she's pretty obviously enjoying herself despite her objections.
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It doesn't really look like it to me, personally. A bit extreme to be innocent fun.
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Well that's chaos for you.
I'm sure Fluttershy might be disappointed in Discord yes, but heartbroken seems a bit extreme.
Regardless I can basically say, being the author, that Snowdrift isn't as opposed to this as she may lead on.
Honestly it's a bit of a problem for me. I feel some might want to really see her struggle with being female, but to be blunt, I'm so sick and tired of seeing that in these kind of stories. Why can't the main character enjoy the crazy situation they've been thrown into for once?