This was a interesting chapter for sure. Twilight being Twilight was the voice of reason in everything lol. But I think that is something that Rarity needed. Someone who will tell her how it is and not dance around the topic with her. Being friends sometime mean telling them what they need to hear. I do wonder what is her endgame with WolfBane tho?We know she want some attention and affection right now and WB is giving her that. I wonder will she end up hooking up with him before she does with Spike? I mean I am SOOOO seeing a scene when she is out on a date with WolfBane and they end up running into Spike. Oh man I wonder how he will feel seeing Rarity on another date with a Stallion even after that moment they shared. I am sure he wouldn't make a scene or do anything to ruin it, since this isn't the first time he has seen her on a date. But this is the first time it has happen since Rarity has been more exploitative about her feelings for Spike herself. Than there is the wonder on if WolfBane share Shy's fear of dragons, and it isn't like he has been around Spike for years like Shy has where she can trust him. I hope the remaining of their friends who are still in the good with AJ are being there with her. I can't see Shy and Pinkie letting be be alone with their support. And Dash would kick her door in to check up on her good friend lol. I like how you handled the nest thing for sure, it worked out much better than I thought it would.
9131243 I defiantly wanted to make her more grounded versus the last big time she appeared.
WB will play a more interesting part than just an old high school crush. Think back to his profession and how that might help Rarity- though that's all I'll spill for now.
And that would be an interesting element to add in. It would show that some ponies still have primal fears and prejudices, even though Equestrian society has been more accepting in the integration of different species.
Because I know there are hearts heavy out there for apple horse, she is being taken care of in this point of the book and thankfully isn't going about this alone. Though I think she would still be a little difficult, fresh of being hurt. But Rainbow would just roll her eyes and help her anyway.
And thank you for that about her nest! I was worried about that it would be too forced or seem too personalized for her. Thank you again for your feedback! Next chapter will be out tomorrow!
I will I apologize since these are a couple of chapters late, I lost my internet midway in a raid, they were not happy.
Chapter of the Tea I have to say I was really surprised at the reason to why everyone surprised Rarity, Opal had kittens, I have to say that was quite nice. I am actually glad she was able to save her friendship with Pinkie. I am still waiting for what she has to say to AJ. I do feel like she is walking in a thin thread with her relationships, that's usually a cliche in which bad things will happen.
Chapter of Dragon Envie (French) This is the moment in which I really want for Rarity to talk face to face with AJ. To let her know that she is very precious to her, that she didn't mean to hurt her that way and make her feel like she is someone really special. I know that it is a really hard thing to do, but the longer you sit on the worse it can get. I smiled at what bell said
It seems the Apple family likes unicorns
so it hints that she may swing both ways (C'est un bijou épicé pour vous!) I was surprised by Zecora (oh you!) and her one and only book of Dragon mating probably laying out where everyone could see. I was actually able to relate with Rarity on this part, the fear of being romantically rejected before you can even confess.
Chapter of the Gift Apple (Danish) It is good to know that we can at least rely on Twilight in for some help, but I am not so sure she is right about Bell since Bell might be swinging both ways since she did hint that she knew about AB on the previous chapter. Bell is moving out, it would probably mean that by moving out she is not only being independent but would be making a serious reach for relationships. I feel like in this chapter I lost a bit of the sympathy I had for Rarity from the previous chapter. I am not even sure if she actually cares about Spike or just wants to use him just to get laid and get it over with. A guy shows up, has some cheese lines and ask her for a date, she could have said no, said that she is currently interested on someone else but instead, she will see him next Tuesday. At that point, I lost sympathy for her. She hurt AJ, and I know she will make up with her soon, she is trying to seduce Spike, knowing very well that he may still have feelings for her and it still not official with Bell, but I feel like she is creating chaos that going to hurt everyone around her all because she is not thinking rationally. I really do hope she is able to see this before that happens. On a lighter note, I always saw Male Dragons as the ones to impress the females by building nests during mating season. This is an example:
9131435 Well I am glad to hear you've gotten it back! I hope everything is alright on your end?
And closure for AJ is coming soon! I hope you will all enjoy how it plays out, all I have to say is keep an eye on the apple themed chapter coming next. Rarity has drifted apart from her friends overtime if anything, on top of being stressed I can see how it looks like she's treading on thin lines- which I wouldn't say she is per say.
WolfBane is the one she went on a date with in Wolf de Flora- the chapter with hair fondling and nacho-burgers. And you can't get cheesier than asking someone on a date with a nachos! Should I feel ashamed that might work on me? Spike is already going on a date with her sister, so she respectfully stops her advances on him. Opening up her mind to what if Sweetie gets with him? So accepting the date with WB adds a little buffer in case things do go well, and it still is just a hang out right now. And when you've been lonely for a long time in that way and someone comes along offering you that attention...even the strong willed of us struggle to not want a little.
If anything she is trying to respect Spike's choices, something any healthy relationship should have though little do. I will work harder to show this since it may not have been clear. But this shows a mature respect for him. Rarity ends up becoming more inspired to customize her bed for herself from the book than for mating, which kept her busy and let thoughts of seduction slip her mind for the time being. Becoming so engrossed she falls asleep, instead of obsessing how it went when Sweetie gets back.
And who knows, maybe Zecora's is interested in the female dragon . She always seems to have half her books out, and usually we have our newer books pretty front and center to get to them.
At first I thought it would be great to see Spike build a nest, though we don't know who it is for as his species mates for life. But it didn't resonate well with my beta readers and there were a lot of contrivances that went along with it. Who knows though? Maybe Spike can still do this, and then he sees Rarity's bed and looses it. I hadn't read a pony building a nest before and wanted to see if I could, so I made the female dragons the ones who did built them. Being the egg bearers it would be a relief to already feel at home in something you built then to move into someone who probably doesn't think much about the eggs, just the action.
Thank you for your feedback! And as always, take care of yourself and have an amazing day!
This was a interesting chapter for sure. Twilight being Twilight was the voice of reason in everything lol. But I think that is something that Rarity needed. Someone who will tell her how it is and not dance around the topic with her. Being friends sometime mean telling them what they need to hear. I do wonder what is her endgame with WolfBane tho?We know she want some attention and affection right now and WB is giving her that. I wonder will she end up hooking up with him before she does with Spike? I mean I am SOOOO seeing a scene when she is out on a date with WolfBane and they end up running into Spike. Oh man I wonder how he will feel seeing Rarity on another date with a Stallion even after that moment they shared. I am sure he wouldn't make a scene or do anything to ruin it, since this isn't the first time he has seen her on a date. But this is the first time it has happen since Rarity has been more exploitative about her feelings for Spike herself. Than there is the wonder on if WolfBane share Shy's fear of dragons, and it isn't like he has been around Spike for years like Shy has where she can trust him. I hope the remaining of their friends who are still in the good with AJ are being there with her. I can't see Shy and Pinkie letting be be alone with their support. And Dash would kick her door in to check up on her good friend lol. I like how you handled the nest thing for sure, it worked out much better than I thought it would.
9131243
I defiantly wanted to make her more grounded versus the last big time she appeared.
WB will play a more interesting part than just an old high school crush. Think back to his profession and how that might help Rarity- though that's all I'll spill for now.
And that would be an interesting element to add in. It would show that some ponies still have primal fears and prejudices, even though Equestrian society has been more accepting in the integration of different species.
Because I know there are hearts heavy out there for apple horse, she is being taken care of in this point of the book and thankfully isn't going about this alone. Though I think she would still be a little difficult, fresh of being hurt. But Rainbow would just roll her eyes and help her anyway.
And thank you for that about her nest! I was worried about that it would be too forced or seem too personalized for her. Thank you again for your feedback! Next chapter will be out tomorrow!
I will I apologize since these are a couple of chapters late, I lost my internet midway in a raid, they were not happy.
Chapter of the Tea
I have to say I was really surprised at the reason to why everyone surprised Rarity, Opal had kittens, I have to say that was quite nice. I am actually glad she was able to save her friendship with Pinkie. I am still waiting for what she has to say to AJ.
I do feel like she is walking in a thin thread with her relationships, that's usually a cliche in which bad things will happen.
Chapter of Dragon Envie (French)
This is the moment in which I really want for Rarity to talk face to face with AJ. To let her know that she is very precious to her, that she didn't mean to hurt her that way and make her feel like she is someone really special. I know that it is a really hard thing to do, but the longer you sit on the worse it can get.
I smiled at what bell said
so it hints that she may swing both ways (C'est un bijou épicé pour vous!)
I was surprised by Zecora (oh you!) and her one and only book of Dragon mating probably laying out where everyone could see.
I was actually able to relate with Rarity on this part, the fear of being romantically rejected before you can even confess.
Chapter of the Gift Apple (Danish)
It is good to know that we can at least rely on Twilight in for some help, but I am not so sure she is right about Bell since Bell might be swinging both ways since she did hint that she knew about AB on the previous chapter.
Bell is moving out, it would probably mean that by moving out she is not only being independent but would be making a serious reach for relationships.
I feel like in this chapter I lost a bit of the sympathy I had for Rarity from the previous chapter. I am not even sure if she actually cares about Spike or just wants to use him just to get laid and get it over with. A guy shows up, has some cheese lines and ask her for a date, she could have said no, said that she is currently interested on someone else but instead, she will see him next Tuesday. At that point, I lost sympathy for her. She hurt AJ, and I know she will make up with her soon, she is trying to seduce Spike, knowing very well that he may still have feelings for her and it still not official with Bell, but I feel like she is creating chaos that going to hurt everyone around her all because she is not thinking rationally. I really do hope she is able to see this before that happens.
On a lighter note, I always saw Male Dragons as the ones to impress the females by building nests during mating season. This is an example:
9131435
Well I am glad to hear you've gotten it back! I hope everything is alright on your end?
And closure for AJ is coming soon! I hope you will all enjoy how it plays out, all I have to say is keep an eye on the apple themed chapter coming next. Rarity has drifted apart from her friends overtime if anything, on top of being stressed I can see how it looks like she's treading on thin lines- which I wouldn't say she is per say.
WolfBane is the one she went on a date with in Wolf de Flora- the chapter with hair fondling and nacho-burgers.
And you can't get cheesier than asking someone on a date with a nachos! Should I feel ashamed that might work on me?
Spike is already going on a date with her sister, so she respectfully stops her advances on him. Opening up her mind to what if Sweetie gets with him? So accepting the date with WB adds a little buffer in case things do go well, and it still is just a hang out right now. And when you've been lonely for a long time in that way and someone comes along offering you that attention...even the strong willed of us struggle to not want a little.
If anything she is trying to respect Spike's choices, something any healthy relationship should have though little do. I will work harder to show this since it may not have been clear. But this shows a mature respect for him. Rarity ends up becoming more inspired to customize her bed for herself from the book than for mating, which kept her busy and let thoughts of seduction slip her mind for the time being. Becoming so engrossed she falls asleep, instead of obsessing how it went when Sweetie gets back.
And who knows, maybe Zecora's is interested in the female dragon . She always seems to have half her books out, and usually we have our newer books pretty front and center to get to them.
At first I thought it would be great to see Spike build a nest, though we don't know who it is for as his species mates for life. But it didn't resonate well with my beta readers and there were a lot of contrivances that went along with it. Who knows though? Maybe Spike can still do this, and then he sees Rarity's bed and looses it. I hadn't read a pony building a nest before and wanted to see if I could, so I made the female dragons the ones who did built them. Being the egg bearers it would be a relief to already feel at home in something you built then to move into someone who probably doesn't think much about the eggs, just the action.
Thank you for your feedback! And as always, take care of yourself and have an amazing day!