9122797 That's kind of the vision I have for her. Substitute the ivory-iris with pink curls, and the red coat for white and I think she would look similar. Same body shape though! Of course my avatar just something I made real quick to represent myself- think of it as an O.C. of sorts.
And thank you for the question! I will try and make that more clear in the story! Have an amazing day!
This is interesting for sure. I think it would be a amazing turn if Sweetie started to date Bloom. Spike being sad he missed his chance goes to the one mare he always felt he could count on and confide in, Rarity. Which for her having a open and vulnerable Spike come to her is just what she want. And in that night she make her desire come true.... and Spike WREAKS her, after years of built up lust and feelings for her he let them all go and for someone who is so intimacy hungry as Rarity is she will love it more than anything else, willing to do anything and everything for this drake that is making her feel loved and like a mare once again. They decide to hide this of course. Which will be interesting when she decide to be nice and go on another date with this Stallion again but lets be honest a stallion can't compare to what she has now had finally. But she also want to hide this from Sweetie till her relationship with Bloom is more set in stone so she doesn't have to worry about her coming in and stealing him away. But she can't get enough of Spike and lets be far here a hot Cougar who is willing to do anything and everything to please you and submit to you fully.... who would ever turn that down lol. There are still alot of interesting places this story could go for sure and even this is just one route I see it headed down.
9123009 That's a very interesting take on the story indeed! I may not be able to resist incorporating some of that in there, if that would be alright with you. Thank you so much for the feedback, it was fascinating and I enjoyed it! I won't spoil anything, but my hope is you'll be pleasantly surprised where this story goes! A lot of this build up will pay off, and little details will become important later! And like always, take care of yourself and have anamazing day! (Or night )
9123073 Sure use any idea that inspire you from my writing I don't mind at all. I mean I just think the idea of the older mare, who clearly CLEARLY has a fantasy of being dominated and claimed by a large strapping drake, honestly manipulating her younger sister into going for someone else so she can work her way in and claiming him for herself just seem so fitting for her. She will do all she can to keep him to herself and give him all the desire and passion a male who I assume is in his 20s could want. Spike's dragon nature could also come into play, Rarity with her desires could have looked into what dragon's like and what triggers them and set the stage for her advantage. I mean I can see her burning some incense, dragon's bane or some kind of herd that is a strong aphrodisiac for dragons when he comes over to confide in her over losing his chance with Sweetie. She could also read up that dragon's have a strong desire to dominate their mates if they show signs of submission. Which would work out very well for her kinks lol, hell she could even know that certain gems have a aphrodisiac effect on dragons when they eat them. She manipulate the field to get what she want and that would be super cool to see. I do also wonder why throughout the whole story it seemed that Sweetie is resentful or spiteful to Rarity?
I wonder if there is a reason behind it or was I just looking too much into it. I do wonder with how much screentime AJ is getting in this story as well if she will play a big part in this. We already know Rarity is Bi, I honestly wouldn't be shocked if down the road after she feel she has gotten a firm hold on Spike and know he wont wonder off she decide to help out her long time friend by helping her get some of that release she has been desiring as well.
Lol I can so see this being fun showing how just wild Rarity and Spike are, both two being dying for so much passion and desire they will lose themselves with one another. I kinda got the idea of at one point Rarity lead Spike into Sweetie's room when she isn't there and tell him to take her right there. And they go wild both honestly loving how wild and kinky it is to just ruin her sheets lol. I can see Rarity also being HUGE on getting off on PDA even if no one else sees it. Like them walking down the road and she feel Spike groping her flank or even going so far to play with her as they are walking she would LOVE the attention he is giving her and would so want more. Him touching her under a table as they go out to eat, unbeknownst to everyone that it is a date. Lol I just had a funny scene of her going under the table and start to blow him. The waitress come to get their order. But Spike decide to have some fun and lean back and lift up the table cloth to show Rarity sucking him. She look at the waitress but she so much enjoying it goes back to sucking him even as the waitress watch too stunned to say anything and hurry off to get their food with a massive blush on the mares face.
Sorry for all the ideas, I tend to shoot off ideas rapid fire when I read a story I enjoy lol.
Will the Sweetie Belle in your avatar eventually look like that in this story?
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That's kind of the vision I have for her. Substitute the ivory-iris with pink curls, and the red coat for white and I think she would look similar. Same body shape though!
Of course my avatar just something I made real quick to represent myself- think of it as an O.C. of sorts.
And thank you for the question! I will try and make that more clear in the story! Have an amazing day!
This is interesting for sure. I think it would be a amazing turn if Sweetie started to date Bloom. Spike being sad he missed his chance goes to the one mare he always felt he could count on and confide in, Rarity. Which for her having a open and vulnerable Spike come to her is just what she want. And in that night she make her desire come true.... and Spike WREAKS her, after years of built up lust and feelings for her he let them all go and for someone who is so intimacy hungry as Rarity is she will love it more than anything else, willing to do anything and everything for this drake that is making her feel loved and like a mare once again. They decide to hide this of course. Which will be interesting when she decide to be nice and go on another date with this Stallion again but lets be honest a stallion can't compare to what she has now had finally. But she also want to hide this from Sweetie till her relationship with Bloom is more set in stone so she doesn't have to worry about her coming in and stealing him away. But she can't get enough of Spike and lets be far here a hot Cougar who is willing to do anything and everything to please you and submit to you fully.... who would ever turn that down lol. There are still alot of interesting places this story could go for sure and even this is just one route I see it headed down.
9123009
That's a very interesting take on the story indeed! I may not be able to resist incorporating some of that in there, if that would be alright with you. Thank you so much for the feedback, it was fascinating and I enjoyed it!
I won't spoil anything, but my hope is you'll be pleasantly surprised where this story goes! A lot of this build up will pay off, and little details will become important later!
And like always, take care of yourself and have anamazing day! (Or night )
9123073
Sure use any idea that inspire you from my writing I don't mind at all. I mean I just think the idea of the older mare, who clearly CLEARLY has a fantasy of being dominated and claimed by a large strapping drake, honestly manipulating her younger sister into going for someone else so she can work her way in and claiming him for herself just seem so fitting for her. She will do all she can to keep him to herself and give him all the desire and passion a male who I assume is in his 20s could want. Spike's dragon nature could also come into play, Rarity with her desires could have looked into what dragon's like and what triggers them and set the stage for her advantage. I mean I can see her burning some incense, dragon's bane or some kind of herd that is a strong aphrodisiac for dragons when he comes over to confide in her over losing his chance with Sweetie. She could also read up that dragon's have a strong desire to dominate their mates if they show signs of submission. Which would work out very well for her kinks lol, hell she could even know that certain gems have a aphrodisiac effect on dragons when they eat them. She manipulate the field to get what she want and that would be super cool to see. I do also wonder why throughout the whole story it seemed that Sweetie is resentful or spiteful to Rarity?
I wonder if there is a reason behind it or was I just looking too much into it. I do wonder with how much screentime AJ is getting in this story as well if she will play a big part in this. We already know Rarity is Bi, I honestly wouldn't be shocked if down the road after she feel she has gotten a firm hold on Spike and know he wont wonder off she decide to help out her long time friend by helping her get some of that release she has been desiring as well.
Lol I can so see this being fun showing how just wild Rarity and Spike are, both two being dying for so much passion and desire they will lose themselves with one another. I kinda got the idea of at one point Rarity lead Spike into Sweetie's room when she isn't there and tell him to take her right there. And they go wild both honestly loving how wild and kinky it is to just ruin her sheets lol. I can see Rarity also being HUGE on getting off on PDA even if no one else sees it. Like them walking down the road and she feel Spike groping her flank or even going so far to play with her as they are walking she would LOVE the attention he is giving her and would so want more. Him touching her under a table as they go out to eat, unbeknownst to everyone that it is a date. Lol I just had a funny scene of her going under the table and start to blow him. The waitress come to get their order. But Spike decide to have some fun and lean back and lift up the table cloth to show Rarity sucking him. She look at the waitress but she so much enjoying it goes back to sucking him even as the waitress watch too stunned to say anything and hurry off to get their food with a massive blush on the mares face.
Sorry for all the ideas, I tend to shoot off ideas rapid fire when I read a story I enjoy lol.