9123212 Please, never apologize for shooting your ideas at me! I am absolutely fawning over this!
Rarity's kinks will defiantly begin to shine through the stories progression. (Even in the chapter I just published. ) And haha, yeah, AppleJack is defiantly given a bigger role.
There is a reason for Spike's attraction to ponies, though I won't spoil it as I doubt most will see it coming, and having the "Oh Shit!" element in a story is crucial.
And Rarity will begin to peruse dragon knowledge, acquiring a lot of it from someone you'd never suspect.
There are a large amount of things being foreshadowed here- just about every single word as a purpose, so I would encouraging plunging as deep as you can, as there is a lot to uncover!
And it makes me ever so happy your enjoying this! I will keep trying to do my part to keep you thoroughly entertained!
Please keep up with this feedback! It motivates me even more and I love it!
Wow I didn't see this turn coming at all. I mean I had a feeling AJ and Rarity might hook up but didn't think it would be this soon. But I think it did go a interesting route with Rarity being far too rough with AJ. Which I didn't see coming at all, I figured AJ would be tough enough to take anything but there is a difference between tough and being tough sexually. Some people just don't like rough things and AJ might not enjoy that both physically and mentally. But this also show Rarity's lust and desire might even be stronger than even she knew it. To me it does make a strong case for her and Spike. She can't hurt Spike physically really. And from what is to be believed about Dragon's they have monsterous stamina due to their greed and their ability to feel feeling stronger than almost any other species. So all this built up desire she has Spike could take it and return it twice over, which I think is honestly what she want. I do also think that if Rarity and Spike do get together she would go to AJ to make up for this, since by then she would be able to think more clearly since she would be finding release on the regular by that point. And she would bring Spike along with her. Since to be honest I think seeing Spike satisfy another mare, one she also finds attractive, would be a turn on for her and her kinky nature lol. I think a scene if Spike does go to Rarity to confide in her and the two of them talking she confess what happen with AJ and start to sob and he comfort her. Showing that outside of being her fantasy sexually he still is the male who has always been there for her through everything and always been such a important drake in her life. It would also make it less of a shock if she bring up wanting to have a threesome with AJ and him. In her house I can only assume it is Pinkie. I wonder what she is doing there? I bet it was her Pinkie sense letting her know someone hooked up between a Belle and a Apple which it turns out as this was all going on Sweetie and Bloom got together as a couple.
Anyway great chapter, I really can't wait for the next one since this had such a interesting turn and left on such a odd cliffhanger lol.
9123429 That's defiantly something I wanted to capture- just because someone looks tough, it doesn't mean they are. We all have our limitations to this kind of thing and I thought that was important to show early on because of something that happens later.
Ah, that would've been amazing for the cliffhanger, but it is another case of mind fuckery I will pull out!
Spike's greed will play an element at some part in the story- that's all I can reveal for now though.
Each sexual encounter in this series is representative of something. This one shows us what can happen when you let lust blind you, focusing more on your needs and disregarding any accommodations your partner may require. And also that people do just get together because they are lonely. Some sex can be very shallow, even if it is with someone you've known for a long time. Doesn't make you a bad person, so long as you make up for it.
And sometimes we do accidentally hurt others, even the best of us. AppleJack has been arguably more lonely than Rarity, and without a mate for even longer. She has crippling insecurities and this fuels them even more. If there is enough desire, I have thought about making a side-series from AppleJack's perspective throughout this. That one will defiantly be pretty dark though, as AppleJack in this series headcannon is extremely troubled, an reveals herself to be more complex than you'd think. She doesn't really allow herself to get close to others, in fact, out of the group Rarity's been the only one talking to her really in about four years.
(Spoiler for the that story I just mentioned, read at your own peril. Also ties into this) It turns out Rarity's been many ponies first crushes, and she was also AppleJacks. Making this extremely damaging to her. She's been wanting her ever since they went to school together, having her own fantasies and when someone this close hurts here like this, she is wrecked.
It goes deeper than just physically hurting her- Rarity really only was looking out for her own satisfaction. After being starved from something so long, it can be easy for us to ignore warning signs (When you look at someone/something through rose colored glasses, all the red flags just look like flags) and AppleJack defiantly desired something more serious. But she has to live with being a quick fuck which...really can be a crushing feeling. Especially after getting her hopes up.
(Spoiler Warning for this Story- You'll only have yourself to blame)
And worst of all, nopony ever comes to check up on AppleJack for a long time. Leading to one of the darkest scenes in this series. This event made AppleJack feel worthless, not feeling like she was able to satisfy anypony since Rarity didn't even get off even after she was destroyed. And she knows she isn't the best at emotions, so what use would anyone have with her?
Though Rarity will make it up to AJ in an interesting way! Thank you again! Next chapter will either be out tonight or tomorrow.
This is an interesting story. I do hope that Rarity can make it up to AJ, cuz it really hurts when you are treated like that. I am really interested if Rarity (remember Rarity," Sharing is caring") will try to go after her other friends since they themselves have said it that it also has been too long. A Dragon's lust has no bounds, both figuratively and literally (Which means that they do have an op stamina bar). I really can't wait for what happens next.
9123578 Thank you so much for your comment! And believe me, I know first hand what it's like to be treated that way, so my heart goes out to AppleJack in this situation. Rarity is one of the most flawed of the Mane Six in my opinion.
(Here are some kind of spoilers? They wouldn't really affect your enjoyment, and will be mentioned soon anyway)
And it's only been a long time for Twilight now. Fluttershy is a little seductive deviant in her later years. Rainbow just got out of a relationship about a month ago that had some intimacy. And Pinkie- well, look out for my next story "Cake 'N Iced Smiles" coming out soon to see what she's been up to.
As always, take care of yourself and have an amazing day!
9123212
Please, never apologize for shooting your ideas at me! I am absolutely fawning over this!
Rarity's kinks will defiantly begin to shine through the stories progression. (Even in the chapter I just published. )
And haha, yeah, AppleJack is defiantly given a bigger role.
There is a reason for Spike's attraction to ponies, though I won't spoil it as I doubt most will see it coming, and having the "Oh Shit!" element in a story is crucial.
And Rarity will begin to peruse dragon knowledge, acquiring a lot of it from someone you'd never suspect.
There are a large amount of things being foreshadowed here- just about every single word as a purpose, so I would encouraging plunging as deep as you can, as there is a lot to uncover!
And it makes me ever so happy your enjoying this! I will keep trying to do my part to keep you thoroughly entertained!
Please keep up with this feedback! It motivates me even more and I love it!
Wow I didn't see this turn coming at all. I mean I had a feeling AJ and Rarity might hook up but didn't think it would be this soon. But I think it did go a interesting route with Rarity being far too rough with AJ. Which I didn't see coming at all, I figured AJ would be tough enough to take anything but there is a difference between tough and being tough sexually. Some people just don't like rough things and AJ might not enjoy that both physically and mentally. But this also show Rarity's lust and desire might even be stronger than even she knew it. To me it does make a strong case for her and Spike. She can't hurt Spike physically really. And from what is to be believed about Dragon's they have monsterous stamina due to their greed and their ability to feel feeling stronger than almost any other species. So all this built up desire she has Spike could take it and return it twice over, which I think is honestly what she want. I do also think that if Rarity and Spike do get together she would go to AJ to make up for this, since by then she would be able to think more clearly since she would be finding release on the regular by that point. And she would bring Spike along with her. Since to be honest I think seeing Spike satisfy another mare, one she also finds attractive, would be a turn on for her and her kinky nature lol. I think a scene if Spike does go to Rarity to confide in her and the two of them talking she confess what happen with AJ and start to sob and he comfort her. Showing that outside of being her fantasy sexually he still is the male who has always been there for her through everything and always been such a important drake in her life. It would also make it less of a shock if she bring up wanting to have a threesome with AJ and him. In her house I can only assume it is Pinkie. I wonder what she is doing there? I bet it was her Pinkie sense letting her know someone hooked up between a Belle and a Apple which it turns out as this was all going on Sweetie and Bloom got together as a couple.
Anyway great chapter, I really can't wait for the next one since this had such a interesting turn and left on such a odd cliffhanger lol.
9123429
That's defiantly something I wanted to capture- just because someone looks tough, it doesn't mean they are. We all have our limitations to this kind of thing and I thought that was important to show early on because of something that happens later.
Ah, that would've been amazing for the cliffhanger, but it is another case of mind fuckery I will pull out!
Spike's greed will play an element at some part in the story- that's all I can reveal for now though.
Each sexual encounter in this series is representative of something. This one shows us what can happen when you let lust blind you, focusing more on your needs and disregarding any accommodations your partner may require. And also that people do just get together because they are lonely. Some sex can be very shallow, even if it is with someone you've known for a long time. Doesn't make you a bad person, so long as you make up for it.
And sometimes we do accidentally hurt others, even the best of us. AppleJack has been arguably more lonely than Rarity, and without a mate for even longer. She has crippling insecurities and this fuels them even more. If there is enough desire, I have thought about making a side-series from AppleJack's perspective throughout this. That one will defiantly be pretty dark though, as AppleJack in this series headcannon is extremely troubled, an reveals herself to be more complex than you'd think. She doesn't really allow herself to get close to others, in fact, out of the group Rarity's been the only one talking to her really in about four years.
(Spoiler for the that story I just mentioned, read at your own peril. Also ties into this) It turns out Rarity's been many ponies first crushes, and she was also AppleJacks. Making this extremely damaging to her. She's been wanting her ever since they went to school together, having her own fantasies and when someone this close hurts here like this, she is wrecked.
It goes deeper than just physically hurting her- Rarity really only was looking out for her own satisfaction. After being starved from something so long, it can be easy for us to ignore warning signs (When you look at someone/something through rose colored glasses, all the red flags just look like flags) and AppleJack defiantly desired something more serious. But she has to live with being a quick fuck which...really can be a crushing feeling. Especially after getting her hopes up.
(Spoiler Warning for this Story- You'll only have yourself to blame)
And worst of all, nopony ever comes to check up on AppleJack for a long time. Leading to one of the darkest scenes in this series. This event made AppleJack feel worthless, not feeling like she was able to satisfy anypony since Rarity didn't even get off even after she was destroyed. And she knows she isn't the best at emotions, so what use would anyone have with her?
Though Rarity will make it up to AJ in an interesting way! Thank you again! Next chapter will either be out tonight or tomorrow.
This is an interesting story. I do hope that Rarity can make it up to AJ, cuz it really hurts when you are treated like that. I am really interested if Rarity (remember Rarity," Sharing is caring") will try to go after her other friends since they themselves have said it that it also has been too long.
A Dragon's lust has no bounds, both figuratively and literally (Which means that they do have an op stamina bar). I really can't wait for what happens next.
9123578
Thank you so much for your comment! And believe me, I know first hand what it's like to be treated that way, so my heart goes out to AppleJack in this situation. Rarity is one of the most flawed of the Mane Six in my opinion.
(Here are some kind of spoilers? They wouldn't really affect your enjoyment, and will be mentioned soon anyway)
And it's only been a long time for Twilight now.
Fluttershy is a little seductive deviant in her later years.
Rainbow just got out of a relationship about a month ago that had some intimacy.
And Pinkie- well, look out for my next story "Cake 'N Iced Smiles" coming out soon to see what she's been up to.
As always, take care of yourself and have an amazing day!