In the afterlife, all one can do is look back at all the possibilities. One pony looks back and sees how things might have turned out had she been a unicorn.
this would be so much simper all her leaps to grab penny got were Had some she passively absorbed some of the draconequus’s energy when he’d teleported her revealing stained-glass lamp shaped like Discord
1. Simpler. 2. Forgot to capitalise. 3. Umm... I think the first Some is extra here. 4. Revealing a stained-glass lamp shaped like Discord.
9282982 I hope it's helping, plus we get to enjoy the results of the good feels. It's really good to see you writing again and also writing something so intoxicating
i wonder if the side effects will actually be bad enough to balance out the ability to look into yourself and tear out your own identity because its morals make you feel bad.
this would be so much simper
all her leaps to grab penny got were
Had some she passively absorbed some of the draconequus’s energy when he’d teleported her
revealing stained-glass lamp shaped like Discord
1. Simpler.
2. Forgot to capitalise.
3. Umm... I think the first Some is extra here.
4. Revealing a stained-glass lamp shaped like Discord.
Dang it, Shachza! Double-Dang it, Sevi! Thanks for those. I'll get them in the morning.
Wonder, will this one actually meet Soarin unlike the other incarnation?
I don't see why she wouldn't come across the Wonderbolt at some point.
Beautiful as always, wanted to point out some errors but somepony else beat me to it!
Looking forward to the next installment as always hun!
<3
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The next chapter’s actually already finished and waiting for editing. Has been since Sunday. Chapter 13’s even in progress.
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You spoil us
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I’ve been writing to burn some stress and get some happy feels going.
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I hope it's helping, plus we get to enjoy the results of the good feels.
It's really good to see you writing again and also writing something so intoxicating
I get the sneaking feeling we'll be seeing that lamp again.
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Derp!
Or maybe I left those in there on porpoise... Hm? Hmmm?! Yeah, whaddaya think of that?
i wonder if the side effects will actually be bad enough to balance out the ability to look into yourself and tear out your own identity because its morals make you feel bad.