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well it wouldn't be pinkie if the uniforms were completely normal
I would tone down the use of commas. They're all over and in places they don't need to be. Yes, they can be great for dramatic use and pauses in speech, but use them too much and they just get irritating and distracting.
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A short time-skip, yes.
Hope it doesn't feel like a dicontinuity.
I commonly use the chapter breaks for skips.
9093814
it is convenient to apply in some places, giving details and perspective. Thanks.
9095162
There can be only one!
They are still exploring who they will be, for Pink at her cafe.