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Ponyess
I just recently started to write stories directly towards the FiM actively, though I have been writing for years, publishing numerous stories at Mibba and the eventual pony story, as far as to the MLP
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this is a interesting start
So is this from that universe of fics where humans are kept as pets, or is this another Instruction Manual type fic?
well it wouldn't be pinkie if the uniforms were completely normal
well i was not expecting them to talk but the fact that they do is giving me a slave vibe
I would tone down the use of commas. They're all over and in places they don't need to be. Yes, they can be great for dramatic use and pauses in speech, but use them too much and they just get irritating and distracting.
oh wow so pinkie pie has google translate who knew
what is pinkie pie planning
I wonder when they humans will tell them they will need meat or at least vegetables with high amounts of protean
is the story is over or just the first part?
9091618
9078324
Don't you hate it when your comments don't get a response?
9091909
yep
9078307
Thanks, hope I can deliver on that promise.
9080055
no, it wouldn't be.
9082305
They work for Pinkie, and she seems to have a sence for it.
9086789
Establishing a cafe, serving ponies and spread even more smiles and joy.
9089036
We'll see.
Will have to work with what is availale, without offending the localponies. Then again, chocolate is canon.
9091618
It is far from over, ut you will know when the story is complete.
9092005
wow thanks for replying to all of them
9091909
I was putting more of the effort into the story, and did never quite get the time to respond.
9091931
While it is late, but I hope these responses still are not too late.
9078324
While I may enjoy to subvert the rules to make a manual, but this isn't the case for this story.
I guess you could view the humans as pets.
9092014
I should have shown how much I appreciate the comments on this story, considering how inspiring they are.
9092017
both thanks and your welcome
random idea someone
Lyragets a little to touch with one of the humanshttps://www.fimfiction.net/story/82430/pinkie-pie-bought-a-unicorn
Pinkie." Amethyst responds
9093578
Thanks for mentioning.
I hope the adjustment is to your liking.
9093701
it is and maybe its me but it seems like their was a time skip between this chapter and the last one was their one?
You shure use the word ponder a lot. But cool story so far ^^
dear god the uniforms have essence of pinkie soon their will be 4 of them
9093717
A short time-skip, yes.
Hope it doesn't feel like a dicontinuity.
I commonly use the chapter breaks for skips.
9093814
it is convenient to apply in some places, giving details and perspective. Thanks.
9095162
There can be only one!
They are still exploring who they will be, for Pink at her cafe.
are the sisters turning into their resective animal?
two things
1 did she turn herself on by accident?
2 wouldn't it be over my breast if she did this yo herself?
this is bothering me to much but WHY ARE THEY LACTACTING it seems so random and whyis one of them lactacting clear gel i
9102385
On the first count, because of milk.
On the second, I will have to get basck to that later, and explain more of that in a comming chapter.
This is tagged Random, for a reason, and not just because of Pinkie Pie.
9099210
She chose the act, but I guess the wording is a bit unfortunate.
Depending on perspective of Narrative, but you could write it like that.
9097542
They are gradualy picking up these aspects.
For the perspective of Ponyville, this is getting a bit confusing to explain; since Ponies are already animals from our end.
Sorry for waitng this long with the responses; I need to consider the future of the story and avoid spoiling too much early on.
9102501
its alright i just wish that their was more sense to the story you know
that was a hell of a change in topic like what the hell posester her to do that
did make a small error .. onless she has 2 right hands ..
She is placing a bowl of salad before each guard with her right hand, while holding the tray in her right hand.
keep it coming
Ditzy
a thought just occerd to me don't humans normally lactate when they are pregnant?
9102582
Ah, okey.
9104996
This was hinted at, in the previous chapter, and the chapter was building towards it for a while. Or so I thought, as I wrote it.
9105218
Thanks, hope it is fixed now.
9106093
Oups, what a sily derp? Should be fixed now. Thanks for mentioning it.
9106122
That is one of these mamalian things, lactation.
Should be from just at the end of the pregnancy and forwards.
9106380
so those girls at some point had or having a kid at least from how you explained it (tell me if i am wrong)
Even in a small town
well i'm not sure but does that count as insest?
9106385
I leae their past vague, but that does notexplicitely leave out the posibility.
For the purpose, Pinkie Pie chose these girls; based on how they wil react and what they could do for her, in her very own way.
9108068
While I don't know of any town in comparative size, but Ponyvile is larger than Appallosa and smaller than the cities like Manehattan and Canterlot.
I pointed at Ponyville, because it is a known location, as opposed to all the communities we have never seen before.
9109866
Do we count them as "Human" for the Narrative perspective?
Are they actual fanmily, or merely adopted family?
Do we consider it sex in the perspective?
If I need to add, remove or change the tags after the effect, I will.
9111725
i was pointing out a spelling mistake you put is instead of in and change the rating from T to M
whats with the milk craze?
still super confused on how they produced gel out side of genetic modification
9117744
This was mentioned in an event a good while beack, but it was never explained or expanded upon. Maybe I should find a good spot, where it could be expanded upon and explained?
9115725
Lactation and milk from humans was part of the original premis, even if that old havebeen made more clear. A human as pet, in place of the canonically sentient cow.
9111812
I managed to miss what should have been obvious.
From the sshort snipet, I thought you were referring to something else.
Ps: I changed the item, hope it was the line you were referring to.
9117748
alright thank you agian for repling
I would go into more depth on how the hell these girls are producing medical gel form their mammary glands
This story concerns me on the Authors wellbeing
9119439
it just concerns me that their doesn't seem to be a plan with the story
well that helps but it doesn't explain why she cast the spell in the first place
9117757
I will need to get into that more, and explaining this.
9119439
Care to elaborate, maybe your issues could be addressed soon?
9119748
I guess you hope for more, than just establishing a pink cafe and associated activities?
9121383
I will kep digging into explaining this as I go.
9122076
alright
wait elusive? why is he here?
9123520
Elusive is here, because;
1 he is hungry and wants a meal -
2 because it is fun -
3 the options -
4 Ponyville -
5 he is a recognizable character that will stand out instantly-
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