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this is a interesting start
So is this from that universe of fics where humans are kept as pets, or is this another Instruction Manual type fic?
You shure use the word ponder a lot. But cool story so far ^^
Sugar-Cube Corner [And the "The" before it is also a bit iffy as it is a Proper Name.]
manner
ask
Ok... this is clunky... the character are cardboard and half the phrases are badly coordinated.
So I definitely don't think I'll go further, even though I'm somewhat curious about the premises.
I cannot imagine Pinkie talking like this. It does sound like her at all. Also why first person?