Fire is my rage, my hate, my anger, my friend, my ally, my passion and my creativity. Fire is many things to me but I like to call it my guardian angel.
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Huh... i wondered what happened to this fic....
Guess i now know
There is no e in ally
No idea why, but i seem to recall the MC being transported to Equestria instead of the world being humanized Equestria from the get go. But i might be recalling a completely different fic.... not sure
You going to finish this one?
9018728
thanks for pointing it out
9018773
Probably. Maybe. I honestly can't promise anything.
9018733
Not a plug, just giving credit where credit is due. Seriously he brought up the idea of rewriting and is helping me out with making it the chapters. Without him, this wouldn't exist. So yeah
9018807
Thanks for your honesty ! I'll keep it in a folder and wait for more chapters to binge read it :D
Hmm I noticed u changed the characters names whats up with that?
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Human names. I'll add the list later and will keep updating it with each new character. So sorry if it inconvenienced you, it just sorta slipped my mind.
9019028
The obvious ones are jacqueline and drake but who are skyler and blake in the show or they oc?
Does it have anything to do with the Stephen King Novel Firestarter?
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No.
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Blake is ExoFemonG's Oc. Skyler is Scootaloo
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Huh ok thats cool and lydia is twilight
Did you rewrite the story?
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Yup.
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Wasn't satisfied with the first draft?
9020803
It's actually due to my loss of the actual idea I had for it. Eventaully I sorta abandoned but as I've mentioned before, it's thanks to my co-writer for helping out with this version.
My first impression of this fic was here we go a chapter of sob and stuff but I hung in and I got to say its not bad I'm now inveated.
I liked it until the name swaps... It is super cringey
Good so far. But still... human name cringe.
Was not expecting the human name swaps...but something tells me that this will still end up rather nice. I'll keep an eye out and read more of it.
Names are admittedly kind of cringey, but hey, fuck it. Ive heard worse. Could've named twilight Helga. Intrigued at where this is going to end up.
Dunno why people find name swap cringy. It's a different universe and not even of ponies. Why names have to be the same? It feels a bit strange to see familiar characters under different names. However, even though they are familiar, they are not the same. In some ways they looks similar, but in other wastly different. Same as the entire world around them. So, it's fine.
What actually strange is that Canterlot remained Canterlot and haven't reverted back to Camelot.
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I'm not that original minded.
So this first chapter has already twisted my brain into a knot. I was expecting another human transported to Equestria so it was a pleasant surprise to find something different. The names will take a bit to get shelved under the appropriate people in my brain. Making work so far!!!
I don't know how to fix this issue. But it needs to be made obvious earlier that this is a humanized Equestria.
I wasn't all that invested in the early story, because I was just waiting for the 'dies and/or falls into Equestria', so when the Summer Sun Celebration was mentioned halfway through it completely derailed the story for me.
Maybe mention that the orphanage was in Canterlot? REALLY doubt whatever-town is called Ponyville here, ESPECIALLY since all the names are different. Just something to say, off the bat, "This is humanized Equestria, and not Human in Equestria."
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I see your point in location but I don't think its entirely possible to make that edit now sadly. Not because I am unable to and lack the capability... it's more of a personal thing of editing chapters when it's all the way in the back. It kinda hurts me cause I tend to focus on future chapters and if I return to old ones it just gives me this sort of detailed feeling that screws me over for a while.
This guy is a F*cking badass
I'm not sure how I feel about this. This isn't Human in Equestria, but instead a Humanized Equestria. Would have liked to know that before getting halfway through the chapter. You should probably put something into the stories front page saying so, in order for people to know what they're getting into beforehand........
Belmont? As in the Belmonts from castlevania?