With the defeat of Nightmare Moon, one would be forgiven for thinking that they deserved a period of respite from adventure. Sadly, Twilight, freshly commissioned to study the magic of friendship, returns to Canterlot when a strange biped appears.
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awesome chapter, can't wait to read more of the fic
Okay now that I looked up the word Fugue, It makes a million times more sense for this story. And both the psychiatric and musical definitions fit it well. what with his memory loss and how he is slowly integrating. I must also commend the use of having the protagonist away from activities in the show, shows that you don't need that specific crutch the show so kindly provides to continue moving the story forward. Now I would be curious to see if you were planing on writing it, how Huey would help with rebuilding the town. I'm also curious to see if you will be brave enough to start shifting the shows timeline with Huey's interactions. And I can hardly wait to see how he interacts with Zecora. Keep up the good work.
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It really made my day to see your remarks! Thank you so much! As for chapter 15, that will be coming out soon. Also, if you pardon my curiosity, what DID you think of the insert into "Griffon The Brush Off" in Chapters 4 and 5? Does having Huey on the periphery of certain important events/episodes help or does it look lazy?
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I quite liked it, especially when he was being nice to one he thought was evil at first, and I am a bit jealous of him for being able to confront Gilda for roaring at Fluttershy. I was quite impressed at his ability to give a compliment about Gilda when he heard Rarity and AJ talking during the party. I also did like him trying to help Fluttershy during the party too. As for how Involved Huey was during the party I honestly wouldn't call it sidelined, he was just playing support, I am a bit sad that he didn't go and stand up for Gilda a little more though, especially during the chewing out Rainbow gave her, but it did let Gilda be seen a little more personable. I'd still like to at some point see a story were Gilda comes clean as to why she was so irritable. Because I kinda get mean spirited like she was when depressed and or annoyed. Hope that answered all of your questions.
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It did! As for why he stood by, it was because Gilda had demonstrated she could look after herself. Plus, her temper indicated that she might lash out, which is why he opted to move Pinkie out of the way instead.
Thank you very much for the reply, it means a lot to me!
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And maybe pranking someone who you are trying to introduce to your friends isn't the best way for a friendship to begin also. One prank is cute but a dozen or so not so much even if it was dumb luck that Gilda ended up the only one getting pranked.