With the defeat of Nightmare Moon, one would be forgiven for thinking that they deserved a period of respite from adventure. Sadly, Twilight, freshly commissioned to study the magic of friendship, returns to Canterlot when a strange biped appears.
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Why is this rated M?
9064855
It's rated mature due to the fact that I don't actually know where the story, as a whole, is going. As such, the possibility exists that there may be content in the future that could be considered inappropriate for a teen or everyone rating.
Better safe than sorry, right?
This just keeps getting better.
9065747
You really think so? What's your favourite part? Do you have any thoughts or constructive criticism?
Sorry for bothering you, I think I got over-excited.
9065775
Well I mostly enjoy the interactions between huey and the princesses and I think the way you write them really shows the emotions behind the interactions, not only are they well thought out but the just draw you in. The character not remembering who he is, is an over used trope but it always leaves things open for later on in the story, for some flashbacks. Honestly I could see this story going the romance route between huey and luna, as he is the one she trusts and could depend on when no one else was there,but this is your story and I can't wait to see where you take it.
9065892
It is very much over-used to have the dreaded "convenient amnesiac" in a story. However, I thought it was better to have the main character be something of a blank slate, who is more open to being influenced by Equestrian ideals than a person who retains their memory.
As for romance, I can confirm that romance is, at this time, considered to be totally off the table in a canon sense.
Before this upsets any shippers out there, I am not averse to exploring romantic themes later on in non-canonical add-ons to the main story, but, for now, I'm focusing on the main storyline... Not a clue where it's going, but it's definitely proving to be interesting.
I can't wait for the next chapter!!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
9067373
You won't need to wait for long! Chapter 10 should be ready later today!