9269445 it’s not, but that’s why i complain i guess? the 1,000+ word chapters were a start, but to have chapters with less than 800 is just ridiculous... you see all these other stories that come out weekly or monthly with 8,000 word chapters... then there’s this, been what, a month or more since last upload and 800 words. i get how life problems or writers block can get some people, but when the story, with over 5 chapters, is being beaten in length by ONE CHAPTER in other stories length? i dunno if that’s lack of ideas or time? or if it’s just someone saying “alright, this is enough, upload.”
9269452 Your criticisms…are completely justified. I'm sorry this wasn't a longer chapter, and I'm sorry you didn't find what you were expecting. To be honest, I was up until 12 AM last night writing this, so if it seems a bit sucky, that's why.
Tell you what, I'll edit it today, and even add in a little teasing, (Just for you ;) ), and try my best to make the chapter more entertaining. Thank you for your criticism.
9269777 i enjoyed the chapter all the same, a bit of the story so far seems a bit rushed to put in to one chapter is all i’m saying, to fit a story to a project, you need time, space and a lot of thought to put into it. it’s not that i don’t like the story so far, it’s cool, it’s funny, it’s got it’s own romantic sitcom-esc feel to it with a slight bit of story progression each chapter, i think what needs to happen is like a chapter (or chapters) that’s just backgrounds about what the girls used to do/still do depending, and/or a full why and how they got there. obviously the whole where they’re gonna stay is picked up by Sunset, which is nice, but it’s a bit... disorienting to throw a character in without giving them a proper background.
boooooo short chapter AND no teasing :<
LAAAAAAAAAAME
9269432
*looks at previous chapters* They're all rather short. How is this different from the norm for this story?
9269445
it’s not, but that’s why i complain i guess? the 1,000+ word chapters were a start, but to have chapters with less than 800 is just ridiculous... you see all these other stories that come out weekly or monthly with 8,000 word chapters... then there’s this, been what, a month or more since last upload and 800 words. i get how life problems or writers block can get some people, but when the story, with over 5 chapters, is being beaten in length by ONE CHAPTER in other stories length? i dunno if that’s lack of ideas or time? or if it’s just someone saying “alright, this is enough, upload.”
9269452
Your criticisms…are completely justified. I'm sorry this wasn't a longer chapter, and I'm sorry you didn't find what you were expecting. To be honest, I was up until 12 AM last night writing this, so if it seems a bit sucky, that's why.
Tell you what, I'll edit it today, and even add in a little teasing, (Just for you ;) ), and try my best to make the chapter more entertaining. Thank you for your criticism.
9269777
i enjoyed the chapter all the same, a bit of the story so far seems a bit rushed to put in to one chapter is all i’m saying, to fit a story to a project, you need time, space and a lot of thought to put into it. it’s not that i don’t like the story so far, it’s cool, it’s funny, it’s got it’s own romantic sitcom-esc feel to it with a slight bit of story progression each chapter, i think what needs to happen is like a chapter (or chapters) that’s just backgrounds about what the girls used to do/still do depending, and/or a full why and how they got there. obviously the whole where they’re gonna stay is picked up by Sunset, which is nice, but it’s a bit... disorienting to throw a character in without giving them a proper background.
Going to have it continued soon?
9349605
Yeah, soon.
Make time to continue.
9559379
Trust me, I'm trying.