Hey folks. Thanks for coming to read my story. I hope you've enjoyed it. If anything is amiss, anything you spot needs changing or is wrong. Let me know, I'll fix it asap. I just wanna give you the best experience reading this I can. Also... Don't worry about Aqua. I'm sure she'll adjust >:)

I can already see this ending in Stockholm Syndrome.

Other than that I noticed an error.

“Or you sick, daddy?

That should be Are.

9300233
Thank you for the spot! :) I swear, you can read it 100 times and miss the simplest of things -.-

Poor Aqua Star. I know this sounds redundant given how it will go, but it makes you really wish there's a happy ending for her.

9300256
Well... The tag does say "Incomplete" So who knows how this will end? Maybe she'll escape? Maybe she'll come to love it? Maybe she'll snap, kill him and take all that is his and live like a princess for the rest of her life?

The only thing that is for sure... is nothings for sure. ;)

9300301
Of course, I am saying as her fate touches me, that's all. Thought I guess best for her would be to be free and become stepmother of his daughter. I mean, the way you portrayed her makes her look like she would make a great mother.

9300301
Judging from your comments in the previous story I'd say you love this dark stuff too much to allow a happy ending. Maaaybe she snaps and gives him a dark death or at least tries to and fails horribly. But, depending on your opinion, the option where she comes to love it would be the darkest end because it implies the breaking of her will and resignation of freedom. Either way, I'd bet my house that you won't let her escape this.

This is not a shallow attempt at reverse psychology.

Forced Consensual Sex?

What?

9300511
Yeah, see now that's where I'm also confused. See what do you call it when you don't want to have sex with someone but you're blackmailed into it. You don't want to consent to it, but you're not really given a choice. So you give your body but not your mind. You don't want it but you won't fight it. Is it consent? or are you forced to consent?

It's funny really, I can write this stuff but don't actually dig deep enough into the genre's to understand it. I just know what I like >:)

9300325
I like your thinking. Let's find out. ;)

9300929
I think your tag sums it up fine enough. This is non-con. Basically if the character would've said no in the event that there were no threats and everything was fully disclosed it's considered non-con if they are made to say yes by any form of coercion or deceit.

And yeah I personally would rather the guy get what's coming to him. But really what can she do? Her only friend in all this is the butler, and he's already sold his soul to the devil. He's not gonna stick his neck out for her at the expense of his children's future. So while I would rather an end where at least both Aqua and Ego both meet a miserable fate, if not one where Aqua reclaims her freedom, I'm stepping into this one with a bit of detachment. The premise just doesn't really show promise for any modicum of victory on her part so I'm not gonna cross my fingers for it.

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Thank you very much. It means a lot. Been working on this for months and had to keep rewriting the three chapters until I was happy with where I was going. And I am and there's still a lot more to come. So settle in tight and get ready for a ride!

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Thanks for helping clear it up :)

Sweet a follow up!