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Surprised this has been viewed yet. Looks good.
8919503
Glad you like it so far.
8919503
glad you like it. also give it to an-twan star as well, am just the guy that dig for the uncut gem and he do the cutting part
8922163
The word "Manicial" does not exist. Maybe you meant "maniacal"?
The word "Squak" doesn't exist, but I'm pretty sure you meant "squeak".
Also the plural word "ways" is incorrect in this case. The indefinite article "A" may not be required with the plural "ways". I suggest making it a singular word, so it would look like:
9010971
thx for the input dude
9011024
There are a lot of mistakes left, maybe you could use an editor?
9011053
I do. you should see what it looked like before hand
9011057
I can copy the story and revise it if you'd like. I could then send you the edited part to you afterward.
9011063
mmm later there a new chp in the works right now, also go give my editor for this fic An-Twan Star he makes fics as well and just as well made
9011083
When are you going to release another chapter?
9016997
when the editor An-Twan Star is done its about 80% done but wait for it
9062100
tune in next to for the big update!
Really liking the story so far. It's somehow interesting to read about them just doing normal, everyday things and hanging out. Keep doing what you're doing man!
9095783
thx but like real life there just things you do can make a micro adventure.
plus a little from the show too, tune in maybe a few weeks as a new chp a big one will hit.
9095789
Looking forward to it!
...Dammit. I didn’t find this until now, so Season 9 info is affecting my enjoyment of this chapter.
9768953
don't worry even if the show end this story (and others later) will keep going for now
becasue they show don't want spin off and don't want us to learn about this world more