I feel like this story got changed pretty rapidly from its first inception

Glad to see this come back after so long. Good job.

9672296
Hello Viper Pit,

And yes, the story did get changed. Up until a few weeks ago, it belonged to my good friend Terry the Human, who had cancelled it a while back, and was going to delete it. I managed to convince him to keep it, and then transfer it over to me. He did so, and once I had it, with his help brainstorming ideas, we decided to almost COMPLETELY rewrite the entire story from the ground up, which was actually fairly easy to do, since it only had 1 chapter with fewer than 3k words! Now it's being given new life under new management, and will become the story that it's meant to be. I hope that you enjoy it, because it's going to end up being a very nice story.

9672399
Hello graysean86,

And yes, "Wendelle in the Colony" is coming back! It would have been deleted by the original author, my good friend Terry the Human, as he lost interest in the story, and when we talked about it, I thought that his idea of where the story was going was WAY too dark, disturbing, and sad. I offered to help him revive it, but he wasn't interested at first. However, after more discussions, he decided to transfer the story over to me, and that's when I began to give it new life with a number of brand-new ideas. Terry is still helping me with this story every step of the way behind the scenes, so you have him to thank just as much as me, but I'm glad that you like the story so far!

9672414
I enjoyed it but I also enjoyed the Sombra manipulation from the first one. But I will still follow it because I am a sucker of after sex consequences

9672431
Well it's nice to know that you enjoyed my "Battleship Express" Series. That's been my most popular series so far, though I have written a few other standalone stories that have been doing pretty well for themselves. I hope that "Wendelle in the Colony" will be no different.

And yes, there will be more after-sex consequences, though they won't be so bad this time. What's another foal between a married couple with 5 foals already, am I right?

9672434
Just try not to hand wendllee everything and everything as that will become boring real fast

9672436
Oh don't worry, I NEVER operate like that. I've NEVER had a character become a Mary-Sue, and I don't intend to start now! While it may seem like Wendelle's about to have everything, in reality I'm just lulling the readers into a false sense of security before the HUGE bomb-drop in Chapter 3, and the first part of Chapter 4. And even beyond this, there's a major war at sea, and PLENTY of other challenges to overcome. It's NOT a bed of roses for Wendelle, or Conner Dwight. Who's Conner Dwight? I mentioned him in the story's description, but he makes his debut in Chapter 3.

9672444
I still ship wend with big Mac. Nothing against your plan but big Mac is just so shipable

9672445
Yeah, he kinda is. Not for this story though.

9672446
That's fair

9672448
Not too much of a spoiler, but it's Wendelle X Conner for this story.

9672450
Can I name the baby?

9672452
I would say yes, but unfortunately Terry and I already decided on names for all of their kids. Sorry.

9672454
I hope is at least one to honor her human family

9672457
She and Conner have more than one foal. I wont say how many yet, but it's more than one.

9672458
I'm guessing 4

9672459
You're close, I'll tell you that much.

9672469
Nice

9672469
I look forward to What's in store

9672478
I know, and Terry and I can't wait to show you, and the other readers.

9672479
Sweet

moooooooooooooooooooooooore

9673780
Hello Heart Shine,

And don’t worry, Chapter 3 is in the works right now. Hopefully it’ll be ready soon.

9673844
Thank youuuuu

9674985
You’re welcome.