Well at least AJ wasn't captured and turned into a toy for the Changelings, lets just hope that she can get the rest of the gang to help and take out the Changelings, though maybe they should send Starlight up to Canterlot with Trixie so they can sneak into the castle to find Twilight and return her to normal, though maybe they should contact Sunset Shimmer too so she can help out.
9510416 Unless it’s a one shot or really well written, I’m not crazy about stories that kick intentionally stupid characters around for the crime of being stupid. It just feels like the author is picking on them because that’s the best they can do.
But I’ve gotten death threats from angry people here before so what do I know.
9595860 Sorry, I'm not really sure what you're trying to say. Are you saying that in this specific chapter I've attempted to somewhat mock certain characters' stupidity? I'd like to reflect on it, but I'd need to know if I understand correctly.
9570589 I got, to be honest, I am a little disappointed, those bust pics were my favorite in the series and they had a very condensed roll in this fic. I still like the story overall but the fact that Rarity, Starlight, and Celestia didn't really get porn dedicated to them as busts was disappointing.
9677551 I'm glad you like it so far. I'm planning to do more with Twilight as a bust, but I'll consider what to do with the others as well. One of my problems when writing is trying to balance the story and porn so that there will be enough progress every chapter in relation to the length of them, so I try not stretching the porn further than I feel is necessary, I was also a bit concerned that maybe the busts were a bit too much a niche and might be off-putting for others. Also had to be careful about the removal of limbs to not make it seem gory or permanent. Since the story isn't over yet, you can be sure they'll return one way or another in the coming chapters though.
9679539 fair enough, I mean while an entire scene about Celestia as a bust, being broken until she cannot talk would be fun it would be extremely niche and after twilight, rarity, and starlight it might get somewhat repetitive if they are all busts.
Too bad AJ escaped, its rare to see people pairing her so well with Luna (or any other princess, exception on Twi). Propably will give a lot o headaches to Luna, and also a heartbreak?
Well at least AJ wasn't captured and turned into a toy for the Changelings, lets just hope that she can get the rest of the gang to help and take out the Changelings, though maybe they should send Starlight up to Canterlot with Trixie so they can sneak into the castle to find Twilight and return her to normal, though maybe they should contact Sunset Shimmer too so she can help out.
9570586
Too bad Starlight joined Twilight and Rarity in the previous chapter.
9570589
Wait, I thought that only Twilight went up to Canterlot, I'll have to reread that chapter then.
9510416
Unless it’s a one shot or really well written, I’m not crazy about stories that kick intentionally stupid characters around for the crime of being stupid. It just feels like the author is picking on them because that’s the best they can do.
But I’ve gotten death threats from angry people here before so what do I know.
9595860
Sorry, I'm not really sure what you're trying to say.
Are you saying that in this specific chapter I've attempted to somewhat mock certain characters' stupidity?
I'd like to reflect on it, but I'd need to know if I understand correctly.
9570589
I got, to be honest, I am a little disappointed, those bust pics were my favorite in the series and they had a very condensed roll in this fic. I still like the story overall but the fact that Rarity, Starlight, and Celestia didn't really get porn dedicated to them as busts was disappointing.
9677551
I'm glad you like it so far.
I'm planning to do more with Twilight as a bust, but I'll consider what to do with the others as well.
One of my problems when writing is trying to balance the story and porn so that there will be enough progress every chapter in relation to the length of them, so I try not stretching the porn further than I feel is necessary, I was also a bit concerned that maybe the busts were a bit too much a niche and might be off-putting for others.
Also had to be careful about the removal of limbs to not make it seem gory or permanent.
Since the story isn't over yet, you can be sure they'll return one way or another in the coming chapters though.
9679539
fair enough, I mean while an entire scene about Celestia as a bust, being broken until she cannot talk would be fun it would be extremely niche and after twilight, rarity, and starlight it might get somewhat repetitive if they are all busts.
9679539
Now I m just imagining one of her lings using one of hands to finger itself
9685107
Take off the hands and create a hand based iron maiden for your enemies who really deserve a groping
9685377
Well since their lower halves are still around. Use them As flesh lights. Twi blow jobbing ans rutted. Since they can feel them still
Too bad AJ escaped, its rare to see people pairing her so well with Luna (or any other princess, exception on Twi). Propably will give a lot o headaches to Luna, and also a heartbreak?