This is interesting. I can't help tho that think Spike is being a bit of a jerk to Twilight alot of the time. It seems he can't help but take shot after shot at her when all she has done so far is try to help him with his honestly bit sexiest mission here. I mean so far two mares out of really almost all of them haven't shown signs of interest in him so that is some plus I say. But so far Spike hasn't shown traits that would make every mare in the world fall for him, hell he can't for what might be a good trait for one mare wont work for another. Just being good looking and exotic wont be enough to really win someone's heart. That is why I am hoping that really only one female from town end up with him and he doesn't just bang them all and somehow get them all or sleep with them all and then pick one making it so he took advantage of his situation. I honestly can't see him with Rarity, her only perk to him is that she is good looking. But for personality and really EVERYTHING else I really think Pinkie would be the best match for him. She would be the one who would keep his life from being boring and make it always fun. She would be the one who would treat him most like Spike and show 0 shits about any title no matter who it is. We rarely see Spike and Pinkie stories anymore and this is the prime chance to see a good one

"As your assistance, Your Highness, I must be prepare to help you as best as you can," said Twilight.

Is it weird for me to hear or in this case read twilight calling herself spike's assistant
P.S. it is assistant not assistance

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Don't worry. It is still too early for everything. There are much to explore in Ponyville

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well, He is a prince and Twilight is just a normal unicorn. So yeah, I make it a role reversal.

I do see this becoming something better. Also i think you need an editor.

"What cha doing?" asked Pinkie.

"We just strolling the town as I give him the tour," said Pinkie.

"Wow. Can I join?" asked Pinkie.

Tweaks can be made, BUT i like how its shaping up.

good chapter

Once Fluttershy notice how Spike loves animals just as her BOOM! Shamelessly in love.

What do you think rainbow's going to do.

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just what normal antagonist would do

wow can't wait, its gonna be a fight inset it?

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maybe

you tease, lol.

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well, developing an antagonist is different from developing a villian

Good point, ok ill wait to see.

This chapter was cute and funny as he meets the mares.