9393865 well when I wrote it since this character is mine I wanted to have everything there so people could get a sort of understanding about my character. One of the idea's I had was repairing the robot over time and then showing the past, but that would have taken my character down a completely different path and I decided to go with the idea in the chapter instead.
Ok. Couldn't have waited for the next chapter to say all that in the actual chapter? Otherwise, good job so far.
9393865
well when I wrote it since this character is mine I wanted to have everything there so people could get a sort of understanding about my character. One of the idea's I had was repairing the robot over time and then showing the past, but that would have taken my character down a completely different path and I decided to go with the idea in the chapter instead.
9394033
OK.
9394033
Also, nice avatar.
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thnx I've had it for awhile