i thought this story was dead

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None of my stories will be dead until I choose to cancel them. And I don't plan on cancelling them.

No problem. Love the story. I wonder if he'll get to see Trixie and Derpy again?

I hope the derp isn't pissed when they finally meet again.

Was the grammar in this story always this bad, or has it just not been edited properly yet? Or was it so good that I didn't notice it until now? Hmm...

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Probably just me doing a horrible job at editing.

"Or was it so good that I didn't notice it until now?'
I see the shade, but thats probably one of the best underhanded compliments I've ever gotten. I'll work harder on the next chapter's grammar.

I wish it was longer... I suppose I should just be thankful I got a chapter at all. 🤔

Thanks, by the way

Awkward reunion will be awkward

“That's bullshit, but I’ll allow it.”

best comeback EVER!!!!

For some reason, I completed missed this updating! I'm looking forward to seeing Clean's snark miff some more characters

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Are you going to update soon?

For the people who want the song: Great Big Sea - Ordinary Day

Thank you, lovely author of this great chapter/story, for showing me something I wasn't aware I even needed 'till now
God bless you!

When can we get an update?

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I'm actually in the process of returning to these stories. The recent hurricane did a number on me and I've set out to return to these stories just in case I die from unexplained reasons. lol

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Alright. Please stay safe.

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Been a bit, are you alright?

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Please update.