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An "cool" (lol) protagonist uses the powers of darkness (and the author's favorite fiction powers) to fight against his foes. This might evolve to some form of god/Sue (if that wasn't already the case) later in the story, but that's a coin flip.
Somewhere along the way he'll meet Princess Twilight Sparkle and she'll instantly "feel a connection" with him, for whatever reasons. Maybe he saves her, maybe they're born with it, maybe it's plot convenience. She tries talking about friendship, he'll claim how he's feared, hated, powerful, and his way of life is superior. She'll act OOC and say, "Wow, you must have have bad friends, but open up to me", and will either cure him with her womanly wiles or learn to live with his edge.
After that, we'll go down two alternate routes. Harem route and solo route.
Harem Route includes him meeting all the mane 6 (in this case humane) and, one by one, converts them to his harem. Details aren't important, he'll just do it because. Go on to Solo route as not much else changes.
Solo route: The girls all confide in him and allow the OC to lead them, despite having no reason to. Twilight would make a better leader, but for some reason this nobody who is nothing more than a chump (with plot armor) will have good plans, a solid head, and leadership under his belt.
Slowly ramp up to final boss, some form of god, defeat it through friendship or edge (your choice).
Extra points if you entertain the following:
OC never faces serious threats
Everyone acts OOC around the OC
OC one-ups everyone in everything they're good in
Now, this is just by going off the description and general trends. Not 100% accurate, but I think it's a close enough guesstimate to be valuable.
Don't take any notice of Hamster_Master. The guy is an asshole who like to shit on people's fic's regardless if it's good or bad.
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its fine, its obvious he hasn't even read a thing all things considered in his post. Honestly if it wasn't for you saying he is a shit poster I honestly would have thought he posted to the wrong fic lol.
8775173 lol Your welcome. Plus the guy doesn't have a fic of his own and he will make up any excuse to why he doesn't write one. If you ask me he is a type of guy that like to throw stones while living in a glass house.
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Let him do him, I will do me, and by do me, I mean ignore him. His comment seemed like a token copy/paste one he made up to post whenever a fic he didn't like popped up. If he had taken the time to read my story then craft an actual response dealing with the specifics of my story he didn't like, then yeah he would have legitimate claims to make but really not one of those things he said even relates to my story.
8775286 ok
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However that said and done I do want to thank you for informing me what they were about. Much appreciated and much thanks.
I am super enjoying this story!! Keep up the good work. Also can't help but hope to see more embarrassed twi!
What happened to that douche that he burned the cutie mark off.
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Will try my best to bring you more adorkable purple.
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Good question, you will have to find out next time on PONY BALL Z...that isnt this show...then what show is it? Oh right its My Little Tactics. Well that is a good question you will have to find out:
NEXT TIME ON MY LITTLE TACTICS!
QUEUE OUTRO MUSIC!
"Omae Wa Mou Shindeiru."
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*Explodes*
Watch out for those cliffs man...I don't have to warn you twice. (Loljk) I'm absolutely lovin the story man, keep it up.
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"Thanks I am glad you are enjoying it. I am trying to avoid the cliffs but they keep pulling me back in. Or rather that mysterious person does."
*Said mysterious person fades into the shadow*
*Sees the person do so* "Seriously that is creepy"
8775365 Your welcome ^^
All eyes were on her now, she couldn’t fly from this, and she couldn’t hide it anymore as she felt her eyes misting up. “It was cause of Gilda; she came back to my place before the party was announced, her beak scratched deeply and a cut across her cheek.” From the looks of everypony they all knew what she was talking about. “Apparently Dustan did that to her to defend Fluttershy. However what Gilda told me happened was that he attacked her for no reason except she was a griffon. At the time Dustan and me weren’t exactly the closest of friends and when one of my oldest friends came back with blood on their cheek and a was telling of a hairless diamond dog looking thing attacking her for just being the race she was born…I lost it.”
You have here
“Whoa there girl!” The voice of the farm pony called out before a rope started pulling the zebra back away from her friend. “Ah am as miffed as you but at the same time Ah can blame Dash for acting like she did. If Ah heard about somepony attacking one of my friends cause of the reasons RD gave then Ah would be more then nettled myself Ah reckon.”
did you mean can or can't here?
“Great actually.” He had a smile on his face that confirmed his statement as the pony continued. “Well in a way it’s great. Before I really wasn’t sure where to go with my thesis and my research but now I have talked to a few ponies and I know what to do. I even got some grant money from the Princessess themselves.”
Princessess is the plural here Princess the singular.
after third break sorry haven't had a change to read it all yet been busy not a lot of sleep
“You’re wrong.” Dustan could see that his wording had the wrong effect as she looked angry now. “Sorry not wrong, misinformed I suppose is the better word.”
"Is" missing here near the end.
Great story like the pragmatic approach a lot its refreshing.
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Even in a world of magic and mystery practicality has its uses.
Also all errors have been fixed that you have pointed out, great job as always.
All her friends were talking amongst themselves or two each other about how good it was to see their friend was recovering though as she heard the doc talking about some of his visible wounds though she knew about the hoof mark. The fact it would leave a scar on his face meant every time she talked to him, the mark of her betrayal would be visible and that fact alone kept pushing the aerial ace deeper and deeper into her own depression.
Have along here after first break
Depend on what lore you favor magic also have a enhancing effect on humans physiology, passively of course, speed, strength, mental acuity like rate of learning. The three primary senses humans use most sight, hearing and touch. In a world without magic like ours were the healing of wounds would take weeks or even months, magic enhances the healing rate to hour or weeks. But in such worlds this also blustered by the person will, faith, emotions an training.
In most of the lore I've read even final fantasy this tends to be a back round theme, and human magic tends to be tied heavily to their souls, will, emotions. This makes it extremely difficult to remove from them if not next to impossible. Sealing and suppression tend to work better on humans. But this is a double edge sword a person can easily exceed normal limitation relatively speaking but they can just as easily cause harm to themselves or if they push to far can extinguish their own soul if their not careful.
Stretching his limbs they had finally let him go after three days of being cooped up for tests. He had repeatedly told them he felt fine but they were not taking chances and were taking things slow because of how different his body was then what they were used to. It had finally come down to him telling them the longer that they kept him there the more he would suffer as he was an omnivore and needed some protein in his diet to stay healthy.
Sorry missed a few last night just really tired. Had long here first paragraph last break
Mystic Quandary got my interest an Earth Pony magister even in-training can't be very common. And this is also a good way for Dustan learn and develop his skills and powers. Mystic offers an outside point of view on magic while Twilight give an insider so to speak. And since He also isn't bound by game logic he should be able to come up with a few of his own spells if he learns enough about how his magic works.
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As always thanks for the help in pointing out the mistakes, always welcomed.
Glad you like Mystic, there is many plans for him to come so dont think he will be vanishing any time soon.
Also I may have found a pony maker site that let me make more of a better visual for ponies if anyone wishes to see them. As a matter of fact, though its not in the g4 style here is Mystic, only with out his cutie mark.
i.imgur.com/W7Lhspr.png
...😐😐😑🙄😐😑😐👍
*pulls out sprayer and start spritzing Twilight*
Bad Twilight, stop making unintentional innuendos!
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*pulls out Glock-17*
sorry twi going to have to put you down