The Student Has Become The Master...
interesting.
AHHHH ITS ON HIATUS! D:
hehe just thought of something, its a good thing Octavia doesn't live in ponyville! lol would have mixed feelings about her getting sliced and diced XD
"Any ideas?" asked Twilight. Pinks eyed her and smiled. "I've got somepony in mind."
Probably meant to have a new line between 'Twilight.' and 'Pinks'
Night all clean and without the scent of vomit.
Night 'was' all clean
Don't know why but I felt like correcting something. Oh well, no need for a good story to be too perfect.
grammar much?
Isn't Night Light Twilights mother?
9289485I believe it’s her father. But did you check the release date of this fic?
interesting.
AHHHH ITS ON HIATUS! D:
hehe just thought of something, its a good thing Octavia doesn't live in ponyville! lol would have mixed feelings about her getting sliced and diced XD
Probably meant to have a new line between 'Twilight.' and 'Pinks'
Night 'was' all clean
Don't know why but I felt like correcting something. Oh well, no need for a good story to be too perfect.
grammar much?
Isn't Night Light Twilights mother?
9289485
I believe it’s her father. But did you check the release date of this fic?