"So, she manages to drink all the wine and then moved onto the booze. She hardly drank any because because she was too lightheaded from the wine."
Just one I pointed out, normally I would hate to write a correction comment, I don't know why, I just hate it. But, about the Chapter itself, it's really good and it's nice to see that it continues. (I know that you have many of projects ongoing though.)
2548237 nah, he's just pissed. Give him a few days and some attention from Rarity, he'll forget. Also, he'll need a memory spell. *turns to Agent J* Go ahead *puts on sunglasses as Agent J uses the neurolizer on Spike*
lots of mistakes her,you seemed like you rushed
Just one I pointed out, normally I would hate to write a correction comment, I don't know why, I just hate it. But, about the Chapter itself, it's really good and it's nice to see that it continues. (I know that you have many of projects ongoing though.)
Love this spike
so we all know spike like this
but then he was all like
WOW. Badass Spike. Shit just got real.
2548237 nah, he's just pissed. Give him a few days and some attention from Rarity, he'll forget. Also, he'll need a memory spell. *turns to Agent J* Go ahead *puts on sunglasses as Agent J uses the neurolizer on Spike*
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If he touches pinkamena *pulls out a shotgun and a chainsaw*shit will get real
Me and zalgy need to arrange a 'playdate' with pinkamena and twilight
LAUGHED SO FUCKING HARD!
Where have I seen this Spike from?
Oh no!
Spike walks up to Twilight...
Places a claw on her back...
"Yo, Twilight... You alright?"
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mares in black: equestria
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