At the hands of Lotus and Aloe, Celestia had been shocked to find herself enthralled by the joys of submission. Now, after much training, the two are finally ready to risk bringing Celestia's most depraved - and public - fantasies to life...
Lotus smoothed back the Princess's hood and began stroking her colourful mane with small movements of her fingers. It'd help soothe the skittish mare, she hoped, but it was as much for herself as for Celestia. Her own nerves needed soothing too; the risk they were taking was real. Beside her, Aloe began stroking their slave's mane too, murmuring little soothing sounds. Lotus concentrated on keeping her breathing steady, running through their preparations in her mind. Everything had to be perfect.
I REALLY love these little touches, the subtle reminders that this is consensual.
"Hood up, slut," Lotus told Celestia in a whisper. "We don't want anyone seeing just who's visiting Equestria's number one pit of depravity tonight."
Oh yeah, because if this goes wrong, things could end poorly.
Celestia made an odd whine at the sight, shuddering, her pink eyes wide, then yanked off her cloak with frantic haste and threw herself naked to the ground, seizing the coins with both hands.
Her reactions are half the fun.
Elbow length fishnet gloves completed the look, the stark white vivid against her warm pink skin.
Lotus tossed her own coat atop Aloe's, revealing an identical outfit in pure midnight black,
Maybe it's just the 13 year old in me, but I love the duality between colors, like blue and gold and red and purple, or black and white, it's fun.
"We're taking you to be shown off," said Lotus firmly. "Let's get you dressed."
gave
stilts
Broken.
I REALLY love these little touches, the subtle reminders that this is consensual.
Oh yeah, because if this goes wrong, things could end poorly.
Her reactions are half the fun.
Maybe it's just the 13 year old in me, but I love the duality between colors, like blue and gold and red and purple, or black and white, it's fun.
Best of luck.
Technically, this is grammatically correct, but it has a 'certain' redundancy to it.