It's a start just remember that we can't see it through your eyes and to describe as much as you can :)

Nice

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I'll probably go back and add further detail later.

To be honest, I never much cared for anything related to fallout equestria, but this one feels a bit different. I always felt like Moondancer got the same treatment as every one-off character. They're a hot topic for a little bit after their episode airs and then they're pushed under the rug. I always thought she deserved a bit more than that. This story just seems to work with the character. At least to me anyway.

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thanks. I agree. She really needs to return as more than just a background character in the show. I'm hoping to do her justice with my story as it continues.

With that, I decided it was time to leave Canterlot. It just seemed too dangerous here, especially since I didn’t know any proper offensive spells.

Yeah, becuse outside Canterlot is going to be so much safer

This looks like it might become interesting

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lol she don't know that yet

Pretty sure that she is going to have a hard time approaching anyone that is alive being aa ghoul. Guess the fact she can talk might be her saving grace.

Do draconies appear in this story?

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not sure if I'll add any. it's a possibility though.

It says it just got updated but i dont see any new chapters...

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I accidentally published chapter 2 before having someone pre-read it. it'll be updated tomorrow or the next day.