It was just a normal day for John. Go to work for My Little Pony, voice his character, and leave. Well, at least, that's what he thought. As he walked into say his lines for the day, Discord came through the mirror and dragged him into Equestria by his legs. "Wha! What are you doing? I voice you!" says John madly.
"You don't do me the justice I deserve, I need to be more over the top," responds Discord with a massive, sly grin on his face. "I need more spunk and more things to do for kicks. That's where you come in."
"Okay, I will make you more over the top," responds John.
"Good, good," responds Discord. "I also need to be goofier." He then snaps his fingers and Goofy falls from the sky.
"Okay," groans John as he rolls his eyes. "Anything else?"
A few minutes later, John goes thud on the ground in Equestria. Discord then snaps his fingers and takes the both of them to the chaos realm, his home sweet home. Once there, John climbs onto the couch and into a corner. "I can't believe this is happening. Not today. Not today. Today is the worst day of all days for this to be happening."
"Oh shut it," says Discord with a snap at his voice actor. "Do your best version of me?"
John then pulls it together and does his best Discord. "I am Discord! I am the King of Chaos! Master of Manipulation! The card of all cards! The jack of all jokes! I'm the Reference Lord."
"Good, good," responds Discord. "It needs to be more over the top than that but we're getting there."
Meanwhile, back at the studio, Tara, Tabitha, Ashley, and Andrea look high and low for John de Lancie. "John! John! Where are you, John!" The girls holler. "John! Come out wherever you are. We get you play a jokester but this isn't funny! You're scaring us, John. Where are you?"
A few minutes later, the two notice the mirror in the corner. "Why is there a reflection of John's face on the opposite side of the mirror?" asks Tara.
"Discord got out again, I take it," responds Ashley as she facepalms her head. "And this time he kidnapped John because of course, she did."
"Well, we need to get him back," responds Tara with a smile. "Who knows what Discord is doing to him?"
"I agree," responds Andrea. "Time to go into the mirror after him. Joy..."
Uhm... this is so small it barely serves as a prologue.
There's no introduction to the world or characters or... anything. No setting either. A reader unfamiliar with everything FiM would have no idea who these people/things are, what they look like, what they're doing, or why we should have a vested interest in them.
Any story needs introduction to the world and its characters, more than anything else. This is even more the case when we're in a strange fantasy world.
What you have here might be the bare bones of a basic teleplay, since the setting would be seen by the viewer. You need some exposition and descriptive narrative to set things up.
Tara Strong didn't join the other cast members in the studio for recording. She recorded all her dialogue in LA.
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I know and realize that but it wouldn’t fit the story setup.