Waking up in Equestria is a dream come true for some people, including myaelf... to a point. Unfortunately, this wasn't the Equestria I was hoping for, and those diffrences tend to cause pain... to me.
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Great chapter! hope you continue
I honestly expected that fight to have been finished sooner but I guess the mercs weren't all that bad at their jobs. Thanks for the chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one!
I was super happy to see this updated I have been waiting for this for quite awhile LOL it was a great chapter had a good read and I cannot wait to see what's next.
Nice chap, cap!
More? This is getting really good
I would also like to discuss the possible science behind his apparent 'adaptability', is certainly got me thinking!
I've only got to chapter 3 but this story just isn't for me. Sorry but it just isn't, even so I wish you good luck with it and any other stories your doing or going to do.
So I'm a few chapters in and I like it. But what's this about him being quick to lay and no details?! Harem clearly ahead, but so little explained...
You constantly and only use this word instead of definitely, just so you know.
For example.
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That is not hatred, it is annoyance. Would you be able to read a story that follows the same exact thing as other stories word per word with little to no changes? Would you still read it if the main character was a mary-sue who was perfect, flawless, everyone loved him easily, formed harems, and did quick out of the blue romances that never went wrong? Would you still be interest if the main character befriended everyone easily and got along with no problems nor conflicts? Would you read a story that has a main character who is overpowered and can't be beaten? Would you read about a character that doesn't act human, doesn't freak out, isn't bothered by anything, basically doesn't act normal? Would you read a story where the main character gets no character growth and there's alot of timeskips just so the main character claims they got stronger, yet never explain nor show us how?
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Yes