Waking up in Equestria is a dream come true for some people, including myaelf... to a point. Unfortunately, this wasn't the Equestria I was hoping for, and those diffrences tend to cause pain... to me.
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the title reference is from fullmetal alchemist
It was at this moment chris knew... he fucked up
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LIES!! Lies and slander all of you! Unjust shame on me and mine.
you know i first thought i would hate this but i love it and a evil deep inside me wants a description and Chris and Gilda's private time is that bad should i call a doctor
auch golpe al ego
Poor Spi-I mean, Valiant Heart! :p
I’m... yeah... I hope they fully disband the herd, this is getting really uncomfortable. Heck, him dating one is... weird, but with a foal? That seems to work a little better. I don’t think I’ve ever read a story where a guy admits to being a furry.
I just started reading. Only thing I’m not liking a whole lot is, this herd has gone Mach 12 in no time at all. I’m still not sure how much I liked Gilda’s introduction, let alone the relationship between him and Flutters. Now an OC? Ehh...
Other than that, it’s pretty good.
Mmm... Yeah, this whole herd thing going out of hooves. Or this Flutters secretly a massive pervert. Nothing wrong with adding OC, but everything happens so fast like it's a clopfic and the plot is just a premise for a clop. But there is no clop to compensate for that!
At the same time it's quite nice story so far. Just romance part went haywire.
...she is, isn't she?
If that were true 69 would be considered the next beatles
This guy is living the dream. The whole herd thing is obviously rushed, but the good grammar, and comedy make up for it. It is rushed, but it doesn’t feel rushed if you know what I’m saying. Anyway, I like this story so far, but I do agree with a few people who want to see the bed being shaken. Skipping it sorta kills the flow.
Good job, I will be continuing.