Waking up in Equestria is a dream come true for some people, including myaelf... to a point. Unfortunately, this wasn't the Equestria I was hoping for, and those diffrences tend to cause pain... to me.
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Won't him calling Rachel "Rarah" cause some confusion when you get to the end of the season 5 timeline?
This story won't be as dreary, dark, unnecessarily long and tedious as Dairies of a Madman, will it?
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Nah so far it's more of a comedy.
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I've read that story and while I do plan on this one being long, I doubt it will match the crazy from that story.
But it's still very early in my story to say. Haven't even finished season one yet.
Please continue
Moving on from this one.
Next update pls
I just caught up and I gotta say,
This is a good story! There's not many spelling/grammatical errors which is always neat, and I like how the story is going on so far.
Well, most of the story.
The one thing I really don't like is the fact Chris is just so accepting of other females to join his herd and how Fluttershy is constantly trying to get literally every girl who talks to Chris into their herd, and I understand this is basically a comedy but still! Relationships don't build that fast and I think Chris should at least be a bit more hesitant or even a little resisting to some of the stuff Fluttershy has allowed him to do or how she gets a bunch of people into the herd or even the fact she wants kids so early into their relationship.
But I mean that's just my opinion and all, so yeh!
Have a nice day!
Ahora falta una Loli
I'd like to mention that you repeatedly using word 'defiantly' in place of 'definitely'. Could you please fix it in this and other chapters? It's different words with different meaning. In some cases it's amusing, but still wrong.
...aaand another OC. Well, she's fine so far even though I groaned as soon as you started describing her since her joining herd were obvious right at that point. Well, whatever helps MC live his furry dream, I guess.
Atlantis the lost empire, nice.