This is a story about Naruto waking up eaons after him being sealed away waking up and, coping with losing not only his family and his whole world but, having to adapt to a world populated by pacifist pastille colored horses. without losing his mind.
That was an awesome chapter my friend and Blueblood getting what he deserves for being a jerk to everyone/everypony, and that last line...."you through off my Grove" is really funny straight out of the Emperor's New Grove movie awesome keep it up and let me know when u upload more chapters
for the edgy Naruto is compressible he learned that everyone he loved is long lost and he wakes in a world that is not his anymore i think that everyone will be edgy in this situation he calmed down to the levels that he can be himself again
8554339 i love that movie and blueballs is a dick can we all just say that he is. and i love that song the bad touch by the bloodhound gang it's more funny than perverted imho but it's a dirty song that naruto used just to piss off the nobles and blueballs no more edge lord naruto. maybe down the line if one of his new friends gets hurt or something he will snap that's just how naruto is. before all of that though he is the dumb funny happy go lucky blonde.
I also tried to write the sisters but I have trouble writing them. any pointers on writing the royal sisters and how they act by anybody is much appreciated
8555081 I agree with you that blueballs is a dick no questions asked. But if I can make a suggestion maybe u can have Naruto use his sexy jusu and have caddance how to that transformation so she can seduce shining armor with that transformation. It's ur choice to make and do it I'm just making suggestions not forcing u to do it it's ur choice not mine but I would like it to happen at some time in the story but it's up to u not me other than that I'll be waiting for ur update on this story
8555136 No just take ur time my friend. U don't have to end it just like that just keep adding more chapters to this story and if u can't think of anything just put the story on hiatus and think about what to do next and then continue when u have an idea and so on. I'll be waiting my friend u know it boom baby
8555136 well.. that would be hilarious and/or sad, depending on whether the story is located pre or post canterlot weding, discovering a fake cadence will afect shinig armor or so. Also great history very funny so keep it up
8557159 its up in the air but i lean towards post wedding, i had a blast writing it. but yeah the drama i'm thinking of when you say it like that is like
8557543 i'm leaning towards yes but, i don't know. I think naruto deserves love ya know. just sayin. also i don't know how to write those kind of sense so if or when i do if it's bad i apologize i am trying my damndest after all. sorry if the typos and grammer are bad i am trying and i type slow.
8557681 maby! He has to accept the fact that he will not be able to continue his legacy first and i don't know how to make those kind of scenes. I don't know how to write romance anyways so that's a thing. Also for the clones thats going to be a soft no or a maybe it all depends. It'll happen if it happens. The story's just getting started so just be patient have not even began writing chapter 5 yet. also I like the teen rating. so as to not turn off any readers that don't like clop
8557568 Typos and Grammar, dude don't put yourself down, you don't need to. From what I've seen it's pretty good, definitely better than mine. Don't worry.
8557701 thank you i'm trying i suck at writing the royal sisters and could use some advice from anyone as well as the mane 6 theres just a lot of personalities to keep up with and its going to expand into ponyville at some point in the story so thats even more to keep up with. also romance is a strong possibility but don't know about clop I have a lot of things planned for this fic. including the old world as it did not vanish its still there just a long time has passed since naruto's time and the 21st century.
good job.
thank you evey body naruto isn't a edgelord any more just so ya know hes back to happy go lucky blonde naruto.
That was an awesome chapter my friend and Blueblood getting what he deserves for being a jerk to everyone/everypony, and that last line...."you through off my Grove" is really funny straight out of the Emperor's New Grove movie awesome keep it up and let me know when u upload more chapters
for the edgy Naruto is compressible he learned that everyone he loved is long lost and he wakes in a world that is not his anymore i think that everyone will be edgy in this situation he calmed down to the levels that he can be himself again
8554339
i love that movie and blueballs is a dick can we all just say that he is. and i love that song the bad touch by the bloodhound gang it's more funny than perverted imho but it's a dirty song that naruto used just to piss off the nobles and blueballs no more edge lord naruto. maybe down the line if one of his new friends gets hurt or something he will snap that's just how naruto is. before all of that though he is the dumb funny happy go lucky blonde.
I also tried to write the sisters but I have trouble writing them. any pointers on writing the royal sisters and how they act by anybody is much appreciated
love ya thank ya
V.S.
8555081
I agree with you that blueballs is a dick no questions asked. But if I can make a suggestion maybe u can have Naruto use his sexy jusu and have caddance how to that transformation so she can seduce shining armor with that transformation. It's ur choice to make and do it I'm just making suggestions not forcing u to do it it's ur choice not mine but I would like it to happen at some time in the story but it's up to u not me other than that I'll be waiting for ur update on this story
8555125
that's brilliant it's
all i can say though is maybe i dont even have a end in sight to this fic.
8555136
No just take ur time my friend. U don't have to end it just like that just keep adding more chapters to this story and if u can't think of anything just put the story on hiatus and think about what to do next and then continue when u have an idea and so on. I'll be waiting my friend u know it boom baby
8555136
well.. that would be hilarious and/or sad, depending on whether the story is located pre or post canterlot weding, discovering a fake cadence will afect shinig armor or so. Also great history very funny so keep it up
8557159
its up in the air but i lean towards post wedding, i had a blast writing it. but yeah the drama i'm thinking of when you say it like that is like
Dude best naruto and mlp crossover ive ever read, keep it up, im looking forward to his future in this world.
8557235
Will naruto get a waifu in this story?
8557473
To have a waifu or not to have a waifu that is A question! The answer is maybe?
Im definitely going to read this, but, will there be a romance tag in the future?
8557543
i'm leaning towards yes but, i don't know. I think naruto deserves love ya know. just sayin. also i don't know how to write those kind of sense so if or when i do if it's bad i apologize i am trying my damndest after all. sorry if the typos and grammer are bad i am trying and i type slow.
love ya thank ya.
V.S.
8557504
I wanna see naruto have aherd and use his clone jutsu to have fun with all of them at once.
8557681
maby! He has to accept the fact that he will not be able to continue his legacy first and i don't know how to make those kind of scenes. I don't know how to write romance anyways so that's a thing. Also for the clones thats going to be a soft no or a maybe it all depends. It'll happen if it happens. The story's just getting started so just be patient have not even began writing chapter 5 yet. also I like the teen rating. so as to not turn off any readers that don't like clop
8557568
Typos and Grammar, dude don't put yourself down, you don't need to. From what I've seen it's pretty good, definitely better than mine. Don't worry.
8557701
thank you i'm trying i suck at writing the royal sisters and could use some advice from anyone as well as the mane 6 theres just a lot of personalities to keep up with and its going to expand into ponyville at some point in the story so thats even more to keep up with. also romance is a strong possibility but don't know about clop I have a lot of things planned for this fic. including the old world as it did not vanish its still there just a long time has passed since naruto's time and the 21st century.
856116
thank you mah dude i try.
i fucking LOVE THIS FAN FIC IT'S SO FUNNY!