I tend to really like these kinds of Clocktower stories- in fact, I prefer them to the more kinky parts, funny enough. I really like so much about this, and yay to having a male sub!! (buck that whole gender split, it's so mean when all of the fun stuff and the actual heart are in this clocktower) One thing I didn't like so much is the ending- didn't come together, it felt rushed. Glossy Print seemed to be feeling too low and insecure, that what happened next- the extra picture and aftercare- felt forced. I could really sympathize with her, and if it had been me I would have needed some alone time away from Photo Finish. And I was hoping she would realize that she could pursue her own kind of photography but with more natural pictures. Of course it might come up later, but as it is, it feels unfinished. I still really like this chapter and this charcter, don't get me wrong
I enjoyed this one--I've enjoyed it all--but you manage to make Finish both very flawed and very sympathetic and that's really great. Print is also just wonderful here.
D’aww, what an adorable chapter! I absolutely love how Photo Finish can get lost in her head and not realize problems until something drastic happens. The way she can go from character to emotional support is so loving, and the way Print looks up to her Mistress as more than just a kinky Master seems to give such a loving connection that assumably reaches outside the Society!
Only you can write something that reaches this level of adorable and loving. <3
I tend to really like these kinds of Clocktower stories- in fact, I prefer them to the more kinky parts, funny enough.
I really like so much about this, and yay to having a male sub!! (buck that whole gender split, it's so mean when all of the fun stuff and the actual heart are in this clocktower)
One thing I didn't like so much is the ending- didn't come together, it felt rushed. Glossy Print seemed to be feeling too low and insecure, that what happened next- the extra picture and aftercare- felt forced. I could really sympathize with her, and if it had been me I would have needed some alone time away from Photo Finish.
And I was hoping she would realize that she could pursue her own kind of photography but with more natural pictures. Of course it might come up later, but as it is, it feels unfinished.
I still really like this chapter and this charcter, don't get me wrong
I enjoyed this one--I've enjoyed it all--but you manage to make Finish both very flawed and very sympathetic and that's really great. Print is also just wonderful here.
D’aww, what an adorable chapter! I absolutely love how Photo Finish can get lost in her head and not realize problems until something drastic happens. The way she can go from character to emotional support is so loving, and the way Print looks up to her Mistress as more than just a kinky Master seems to give such a loving connection that assumably reaches outside the Society!
Only you can write something that reaches this level of adorable and loving. <3