A manic earthen mare with powers beyond comprehension has been killing and eating folk all over Equestria. Now she has reached Ponyville, and her next victim to be is Rainbow Dash. But the creature was being followed. Vengeance being his objective.
He is not more powerful, he has been dealing with evil longer. He is 39. He even mentions how Twilight is the most powerful and brilliant sorceress in ages but she isn't very creative with her use of magic.
He, Daring Do, Zecora, Doctor Bronze Savage (based on the old Pulp Adventure stories character Doc Savage), Rocketeer Wrench, and a few others did save Equestria and the world a few times, though they did it in secret and without government approval.
8701105 Hey, I'm not the one making these 'rules'. I have no problem with your char but I can see how other folks might have problems.
I have to be aware of these 'rules' so I don't get into trouble. Rules is in quotes because they aren't official but folks will notice if they are not complied with.
8701791 It's already kind of part of a series. This is the same Arcanum Folklore that appears in The Symphony of Canterlot, only this takes place more than 3 years after that story.
And "Of Broken Hearts and Merciful Hooves" takes place 12 years before the show, when he was 23.
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Thank you.
Thumbs up for this tale.
I liked the grittiness and the different types of equipment.
Elder Sign Array, that's pretty cool.
Chars were handled fine.
What could cause trouble:
You put your char against the mane six. Not sure that's a good idea.
I could see some folks bitching about this.
There is probably a 'rule' against OCs being more powerful than the Mane six.
Other than that I had a good time with this story.
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He is not more powerful, he has been dealing with evil longer. He is 39. He even mentions how Twilight is the most powerful and brilliant sorceress in ages but she isn't very creative with her use of magic.
He, Daring Do, Zecora, Doctor Bronze Savage (based on the old Pulp Adventure stories character Doc Savage), Rocketeer Wrench, and a few others did save Equestria and the world a few times, though they did it in secret and without government approval.
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Also thank you for the review, very insightful.
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Hey, I'm not the one making these 'rules'.
I have no problem with your char but I can see how other folks might have problems.
I have to be aware of these 'rules' so I don't get into trouble.
Rules is in quotes because they aren't official but folks will notice if they are not
complied with.
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Like I said, thank you. It was very insightful. And honestly you are cool.
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Thanks.
I'm sorry if I sounded hostile.
Are you thinking of doing a series with your char?
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It's already kind of part of a series. This is the same Arcanum Folklore that appears in The Symphony of Canterlot, only this takes place more than 3 years after that story.
And "Of Broken Hearts and Merciful Hooves" takes place 12 years before the show, when he was 23.
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I'll check em out.
Oof, harsh boi he be, hehehe very nicely done, Ash, nicely done indeed.
Oh man, I loved how you described Twilight in this chapter. Especially how she's so powerful but also incompetent with her magic at times.