To anybody who missed the warning in the description, I CLEARLY stated that this contained incest and you can CLEARLY see the cover picture is of Luna and Celestia and you can CLEARLY see the mature rating, so you can CLEARLY calculate the fact that this is an adult incest story of Celestia and Luna... CLEARLY!
929637yea, i gotchya. anyways, dont wanna fill up the comment thingy, so in five secs, non serious comments will be trashed. sry! from now on, seriousness please, like this guy.929634 need more likes and views, but your comment says ppl like it, so ill consider it.
929764>>929840 positive comments, high rising view count, and plenty of favs... still wavering my options but i think we all know what my ultimate decition is going to be
929634>>929668>>929764>>929840>>929876>>929894>>929920 With 147 views and such positive comments, not to mention the 16/2 liked/dislike status within one night... I will definitely make another!<yay!
One thing though, in order to make it interesting enough, I've decided to add a very attractive character. NO it isn't an OC character. Surprises await in the future... I just hope the new character wont plummet the story's rating!
“Damn it Luna, I’ve been working all day, I’ve had thousands of ponies up my ass and now you want to irritate me to? Cant a princess feel a little tired from time to time?” made me lmao! Nice fic!
931470>>930474>>930462>>930165>>930046>>929920>>929894>>929894>>929840>>929668>>929634 Lets here it for 30 likes and over 350 views in under 12 hours! Currently, in my opinion, my best fic I've written so far and things are going to get intense next chapter!
I'm working very hard on the new chapter. It will probably be posted by tomorrow, unless something comes up. Please don't respond to this comment unless that urge gets the better of you. Its just to express how excited I am about everybody liking it so far.
932012 OH MY GOD! Every body except for 3 ppl like this. ppl who don't even like incest likes this! As my favorite character of any fiction might say: I'm so FLATTERED!!!
932370 yea, but i wasnt worried about it. i was scared ppl were going to be like "oh this sucks" or "ive heard this song before" ya know? its it being such a success that makes me all happy. (at least what i consider a success.)
Winning. Incest may be wrong but for these two, it doesn't seem as bad. All in all, really good. Fantastic I dare say. Keep it up. Also, your plots joke was good.
This is a warning comment.
To anybody who missed the warning in the description, I CLEARLY stated that this contained incest and you can CLEARLY see the cover picture is of Luna and Celestia and you can CLEARLY see the mature rating, so you can CLEARLY calculate the fact that this is an adult incest story of Celestia and Luna... CLEARLY!
Do another part!
929637yea, i gotchya. anyways, dont wanna fill up the comment thingy, so in five secs, non serious comments will be trashed. sry! from now on, seriousness please, like this guy.929634 need more likes and views, but your comment says ppl like it, so ill consider it.
I'm okay with this pairing
929668 glad ya like it!
DAFUQ!?!?!?! i liked it a lot, and i wanna see more but still..... DAFUQ!?!?!?!?!?!
Lol! i feel a funny mix of shame and amusement!
But thumbs up, u should defintly make another part!
929764>>929840 positive comments, high rising view count, and plenty of favs... still wavering my options but i think we all know what my ultimate decition is going to be
929868 ..... toooooooo make another?
Hmm... Good concept, a pairing that is acceptable... The only large scale issue I have is execution of it all.... I'll keep an eye on things.
921444 I guess I missed that
Princest is wincest.
929634>>929668>>929764>>929840>>929876>>929894>>929920 With 147 views and such positive comments, not to mention the 16/2 liked/dislike status within one night... I will definitely make another!<yay!
One thing though, in order to make it interesting enough, I've decided to add a very attractive character. NO it isn't an OC character. Surprises await in the future... I just hope the new character wont plummet the story's rating!
930046 lol, I like that! hmm...
i can see you changed it from complete to incomplete *yay*
930085 Got enough likes. May take some time but I think ch.2 will be good.
930142 it will, i know that much
“Damn it Luna, I’ve been working all day, I’ve had thousands of ponies up my ass and now you want to irritate me to? Cant a princess feel a little tired from time to time?” made me lmao! Nice fic!
So, this is Celestia/Luna incest clopfic?
Proceed.
930462 lol, you like that? im adding comedy, cause next chapter is gonna be funny to!
930061 Hooray!
931470>>930474>>930462>>930165>>930046>>929920>>929894>>929894>>929840>>929668>>929634 Lets here it for 30 likes and over 350 views in under 12 hours! Currently, in my opinion, my best fic I've written so far and things are going to get intense next chapter!
I'm working very hard on the new chapter. It will probably be posted by tomorrow, unless something comes up. Please don't respond to this comment unless that urge gets the better of you. Its just to express how excited I am about everybody liking it so far.
Good story line, nice plot that should be developed more, but the chapter was too short for my liking.
931785 i'm pretty sure the next chapter will be longer.
I don't like incest but if it's princest, I'm cool with it
932012 OH MY GOD! Every body except for 3 ppl like this. ppl who don't even like incest likes this! As my favorite character of any fiction might say: I'm so FLATTERED!!!
932026
Your welcome. I bet those 3 people didn't like incest, but it was well written, at least for me, so I think that's why I liked it :)
Lunestia is not an uncommon ship, you know. I'm surprised you were so worried about it.
932370 yea, but i wasnt worried about it. i was scared ppl were going to be like "oh this sucks" or "ive heard this song before" ya know? its it being such a success that makes me all happy. (at least what i consider a success.)
Winning. Incest may be wrong but for these two, it doesn't seem as bad. All in all, really good. Fantastic I dare say. Keep it up. Also, your plots joke was good.
Hubord68
(Twi's Innocent) - Scarlet Harvest
934183 i'm pinkie and i know it!
applause
More incest
Wonderfull
If I was a guard and celestia told me to be in her quarters by ten I would be like hell yessssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
I like the story, but you could really use a proof reader, the spelling errors get rather distracting at points.