It's here! I realize there are a plenty full of mistakes I need to correct but I've had this bitch up my ass for the past few days. Got my focus off! So sorry. No bull crap comments please, only critical perspectives and constructive criticism and your opinions on the story. This is the last chapter for this story, so it saying it's incomplete is because of the editing I still need to do. thanks for your understanding.

I think you did a great job!. Do you know what one of my favourite things about this chapter is? The fact that the story is still marked as incomplete Lokking forward to the next chapter!

935949o_0 Uhh, read comment above... Sorry. I may change my mind if I am able to come up with more ideas and possible jokes but for now, I'm a little busy... Plus I've got writers block. This is what I look like><I don't have any good ideas left! I need some time to think!>

Another fantastic chapter. The joke at the end reminded me of the meme. "Do you like bananas? 'Cause your on the moon!" Just to let you know, I'll follow you 100% with whatever you do with this story. One recommendation, use Pinkie Pie next time. You never know what crazy shit she has up her sleeve.

Oh. No more story...

936005 Very stressed and tired. Gotta... finish other story formally known as "Princess Celestia's royal secret". May wright another chapter... wasn't going to... but I never intended on writing 2 chapters for this story in the first place... If i get enough positive "Please wright another chapter" comments, I will though. anything for the fimfic-fans!

On another note, how do you ppl like the new cover art? Give your honest opinion. old or new? which is better?

New is defiantly better. About 20% cooler. I'll have to check out your other story.

936042thanks...... sorry, dosed off there for a... min...zzz

for every 1 person who doesnt like this story, i have another 8 that like it! math rules!

937582... oh.. my if you say so... just give me some time...

Um did you use the term Bronies
other than that just... have celestia and luna speak more royally
other than that .. keep it up

937596 I can use that term if i wish Lol screw the fourth wall! I'm breaking the fifth wall!

in response to every Zecora line (yes even the Brony one): Nice.
hav a mustache my good sir

944314 thanks. i wanted my zecora to be different from the others that rhymed, so i used the term brony!

944314>>937596>>936042>>935949>>932370>>932182>>931785>>931470>>930474>>930462>>930165>>930046>>929920>>929894>>929668 I am putting this story on hiatus to finish up the new successor story known as "Princess Celestia's royal secret." Do not worry, I have the full intention of writing a third chapter! It will just take time! I appreciate all the great feedback and can't wait to hear all of your comments for the third chapter of this story! Until then, please be patient.

946130
Awesome thank you
Usually people dont respond about their work and we worry
awesome now I can read your other work until then

946347 It's just not cool to not keep the readers informed. It's like a famous athlete not doing interviews. just not cool!

visit.946347>>944314>>936042>>935949>>932370>>931785>>931470>>930474>>930462>>930165>>930046>>929920>>929894>>929668 i have made a new blog titled "ASK ME ANYTHING"! feel free to

Yeah! More chapters! Your other story was really good. Royal Secret. I wish I could write books. But I have my guitar! Maybe a colaberation down the road? Also, keep in mind. Put Pinkie Pie in the next chapter. Really. Her and her crazy shit would make a good chapter.

948402 lol. ill see if i can throw pinks in but im working on other projects...

Princess Luna keeps thinking she'll be sent to the moon. Wonder what would happen if celestia got sent to the sun and Luna had to raise the sun and the moon for a millenium

lets hear it for my 1000th view!!! lets PARTY!!!

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976611 thank you!

Sweet read, but how she found the TO THE MOON joke funny is beyond me.

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Lol, I thought it would be a funny deal to totally throw in a little bit of Trollestia in with this fic. I also threw in Molestia on my fic titled "Princess Celestia's royal secret". It's just good humor.

935807 I know incest with ponies is quite interesting to the Bronies! dude, breaking the fourth wall is pinkie's job

Really really intertaining to the bronies and really that was trust such an ass move do you know wat Luna went through on the moon

[ Zecora, at first was frowning but as she heard more, she began to form a smirk on her face. “Hold the phone; it is your sister you want to bone? Well, what you want is some potions that are guaranteed to stir her emotions. I know incest with ponies is quite interesting to the {Bronies!”}-broken 4Th wall alert