Sexty Minute Story prompt fills.
So Sweet
A nice story, but I agree with the author that this should have been a longer story.
This definitely has the potential to be much longer and in-depth. I'd read it, for sure.
“Sure. Breakfast can wait.” Spike said, laying his head on Rarity's back. “That's how much I love you.”
So he loves her so much he loves her more than breakfast? Good for you, Spike!
It'd be even better if Rarity claimed she couldn't allow him the pleasure, because she still had feelings for Spike. Then, THAT seals the spell, or something around those lines. Bam! Huge twist!
So Sweet
A nice story, but I agree with the author that this should have been a longer story.
This definitely has the potential to be much longer and in-depth. I'd read it, for sure.
So he loves her so much he loves her more than breakfast? Good for you, Spike!
It'd be even better if Rarity claimed she couldn't allow him the pleasure, because she still had feelings for Spike. Then, THAT seals the spell, or something around those lines. Bam! Huge twist!