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928796
(Might want to edit that, if the mods catch you you get a 24 hour ban. :rainbowderp:)

Very sexy, incredibly well done, especially considering you did this in under an hour.

928803
yea I was just kidding cus I never dun it b4 lawl reading now looks good...if you know what I mean... btw DAT NAME:rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss::scootangel:

I'm on the verge of tears!The feeling mounting in her was too close to the real deal, and finally she moaned, “Please! Just take me!”
DAT SENTENCE lawl this is SOOOO funny! :scootangel::heart::rainbowkiss:

928796
AND BANNED! did you miss the notice about that? :ajbemused:

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928814
Thanks! Yeah, that time limit is crazy, but I managed it this time at least.

928812
Since when does Dash ever want things to go slower? It'll take some getting used to for her. :rainbowkiss:

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928860
I go by Dan Savage. According to him, coming is the verb, cum is the product (in guys) of said verb. If you can't trust Dan Savage on writing about sex, who can you trust?

Hmm, and you plan to do another one of these soon?

I really liked this one, and I enjoyed the preening part. I haven't read any clops with preening, so this was refreshing!

I'm going to be following this...

~Syn3rgy

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928952
I do plan to do more! At least, when the prompts on Sexty Minute Pony Stories are something I can work with. Most of what I write will involve some combination of Rainbow Dash, Applejack, and Twilight, or ScootaDash.

I'm glad you liked it, and I hope you'll read more when it gets posted.

929232 so what are these Sexty Minute Pony prompts anyways? Where do they come from?

I've been seeing a few different writers do these.

~Syn3rgy

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929338
It's a tumbler, here. Every Wednesday and Sunday they put up a prompt, and writers try to use it to write a sexy story in sixty minutes. (They give us a day to find the time, the sixty minutes is on the honor system.)

So this prompt was "Rainbow Dash learns a lesson." A new prompt comes up two hours or so from now.

929369 Hmmm, very interesting!

Thank you!

~Syn3rgy

Wait what!?!? It ENDED?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOO
Anyway nice story!:rainbowkiss::scootangel:

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929550
Sorry, I only had sixty minutes to write it! However ScootaDash is in my top pairings, so I'll probably do more when another prompt comes up that it applies to.

Glad you liked what was there!

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933225
Um, that doesn't explain much. Did I get my age-of-consent all over your foalcon, or my human ages all over your horse biology?

933305 your human ages
They killed my scientific mind
7 is the equine age if adulthood, not 18, that's older, although a horse can live for forty years or more.
:scootangel::rainbowkiss:

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933349
I'm sorry! I usually try to avoid ages for that reason, but here I had to be explicit because the prompt tumbler is really really big on no foalcon, so I wanted to be 100% clear for them that Scoot was legal here. (I also don't entirely trust some of the less bright bronies to figure out horse ages. I guess that makes me look like a less bright pegasister, but as a writer I try to be clear to everyone.) :twilightblush:

933349 I think that guy just wanted some kiddie porn or some shit like that... I prefer an adult Scootaloo myself :scootangel:

Please continue!

942899
I really really hope that was intentional
I wish I could thumb comments hnggg :applecry:

Okay on a different note THIS STORY
The only fault I can find with it is that it had to end.
I didn't even think about wings being that sensitive, so I stopped for a minute while reading and went "oh. Yes. I can most definitely ship this."
Please keep writing stories. This pleases me.

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I was replying to the ">>O really?"
It made me chortle

Nothing like epic adult/adult Scootadash.

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Yeah, okay, that was hot...:twilightblush:

Alright, you write excellent clop.

To bad it was only 900-ish words long:raritydespair:

Nicely written :twilightsmile:
We need more AppleDash :ajsmug::heart::rainbowdetermined2:

A nice story, but I agree with the author that this should have been a longer story.

Well i never imagined them two together. still thumbs up!!:twilightsmile:

This definitely has the potential to be much longer and in-depth. I'd read it, for sure.

Yup, Scootadash is my OTP. :scootangel::rainbowkiss:

Ha! I thought Applejack had more self control than that.:rainbowkiss::rainbowkiss:

Brings a whole new meaning to "mindfuck." :pinkiecrazy:

“Sure. Breakfast can wait.” Spike said, laying his head on Rarity's back. “That's how much I love you.”

So he loves her so much he loves her more than breakfast? :rainbowlaugh: Good for you, Spike!

:heart::ajbemused:oh Rainbow, your such a troll! :rainbowlaugh:

wow im aroused as fuck and i barely qualify as a brony

so, is a pegasus masturbating when it's cleaning it's feathers?:twilightoops::fluttershbad:

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