Good start, I like it! Gimmie more :D <3

Why did you give Aaron Blaze a human name? He's a changeling!

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You are aware that most "human" names originate from either old or dead languages and have an actual meaning right? Translated most of our names would fit in Equestria without issue. Aaron can mean lofty, exalted, or enlightened not to mention several others I don't want to go searching for. Heck my RL middle name means 'lover of horses'.... Yeah I got a kick out of that when I remembered it after getting into this fandom.

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He was named that for a reason in the story that will be revealed later. Other then that I liked the name, it sounded cool to me so I went with it. Sorry if that is weird to you.

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I figured there was some reason for it. I was just responding to the guy that seemed upset with it.

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You my friend are the definition of irony.

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It's not a translated name, though. Never mind a Changeling name. Of course, the author is free to choose any name they wish, the only real problem is going with a name that doesn't fit in some readers' minds. And you have to admit, Aaron is quite unusual when other Changelings have had names like Pharynx and Thorax.

Continue this

This is nice. Take a smile :)
There's a minor mistake here.

It took one week to get hear, one week with little sleep and food,

This is a great start.

Nice story and great start

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Thanks and fixed( I hope). I am not the best writer and I did all the editing my self so any one has tips or errors that are found please tell me. I want to get better at it.

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Well I cant give an exact date what with life and all but I have already started on the next chapter. I am just not a fast writer yet but I am working on it.

looking forward to the next chapter *favs and tracks*

Not bad.

Well, consider my interest piqued. Looking forward to more.

More please