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The shadows hold many things, and I am one of them.
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Good start, I like it! Gimmie more :D <3
Why did you give Aaron Blaze a human name? He's a changeling!
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You are aware that most "human" names originate from either old or dead languages and have an actual meaning right? Translated most of our names would fit in Equestria without issue. Aaron can mean lofty, exalted, or enlightened not to mention several others I don't want to go searching for. Heck my RL middle name means 'lover of horses'.... Yeah I got a kick out of that when I remembered it after getting into this fandom.
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He was named that for a reason in the story that will be revealed later. Other then that I liked the name, it sounded cool to me so I went with it. Sorry if that is weird to you.
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I figured there was some reason for it. I was just responding to the guy that seemed upset with it.
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You my friend are the definition of irony.
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It's not a translated name, though. Never mind a Changeling name. Of course, the author is free to choose any name they wish, the only real problem is going with a name that doesn't fit in some readers' minds. And you have to admit, Aaron is quite unusual when other Changelings have had names like Pharynx and Thorax.
Continue this
This is nice. Take a smile :)
There's a minor mistake here.
This is a great start.
Nice story and great start
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Thanks and fixed( I hope). I am not the best writer and I did all the editing my self so any one has tips or errors that are found please tell me. I want to get better at it.
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Well I cant give an exact date what with life and all but I have already started on the next chapter. I am just not a fast writer yet but I am working on it.
looking forward to the next chapter *favs and tracks*
Not bad.
Well, consider my interest piqued. Looking forward to more.
More please
You may benefit from an editor. I believe my services are available.
Glad to see a update
The story itself is brilliant, but you really need an editor for all of the spelling errors.
I like where this is going, but you are in terrible need of an editor. if retrosteamknight is unavailable I would be happy to give you a hoof for a bit.
please, please take someone up on their offer to edit for you. I really would like to read this but just as I really get into it another word slaps me in the face and there goes immersion.
Good premise, well thought out, you just seem to trust spell check way too much. Good luck.
You keep saying sens when you mean since
Great story concept, i've been tracking since the first chapter got posted. But please please please get some volunteer editors.
I'm glad to see this story concept hasn't been abandoned, though I question if the narration from the first chapter contradicts the narration from the second chapter on if guards exposing changelings was a thing that killed them off, or if the blast from the invasion did that, and he was alone all along since then, being the one changeling who was exposed over and over again, the ponies not realizing they were the same changeling.
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. So if you want to help knowing this or know anyone who can help, even if it's only on there free time, it would be a big help. I have looked and still am looking but have not had any luck. Ether way thank you for letting me know and I hope you have a wonderful day or night hehe.
Ya I have known I needed an editor for some time, what with being new to writing. My prob has been every one I asked in the past wanted money for there help, and I get that, but I got no money so I have been trying my best by my self. I don't want to sound stingy but I really don't got a penny to my name
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Thank you for pointing that out I will fix it when I get the time.
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Thanks for the info, I will try and find some kind of editor one way or the other. I am sorry that it felt like a slap in the face, I hope that when I get an editor you can enjoy it a lot more.
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They where killed from the blast that sent them flying. I will go back and look over the chapters, if you could tell me where you feel the narration from the first chapter contradicts the narration from the second chapter that would be a big help.
All in all, thanks for the feedback everyone, every bit helps.
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You are welcome. Just your friendly neighborhood cannibalistic potatoe
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No charge for doing some editing for you. I would be "paying it forward" for all help I got when I started writing.
Really enjoying the story. Besides the occasional spelling mistake, its really good.
I love this story. Please update soon. And could you please check out my stories?
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I would love to either way. Of course, compensation is appreciated, but is not expected.
I really like this story. I can't wait for another chapter. Like the others already commented the edition is a bit of problem but it's nothing like I can't understand.
So more coming?
And another great story dies before it can truly get on it's feet.
alas, this story was on to such a good start, and yet, now it lies forgotten
Another great story lost to time may it Rest In Peace
Update?
Update?