Good show dear boy, good show!

Oh lordy, when I first read the title I thought it was a grimdark...
I love Twinkie and can't wait to see how this turns out.

Yep. Tracking

It needs a little polishing up, there are a few grammatical matters, some spelling flubs and it could probably use a Sex tag, but otherwise, it's great. Tracked and upthumbed!

Dis gun' be good.

Can't wait!

Not sure if you're aware, or if you care, for that matter, but your story shares a cover image with another (fairly popular) Twinkie story: "The Baker and the Scholar" by Emerald Flight. As a result, I sort of came into this story expecting it to be a rip-off of that one. You might want to consider changing your cover.

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I wasn't aware, thanks.

919822

Thank you for mentioning that fic. I have it on my read later list, but I'm looking forward to it. Do you know any other good Twinkie Pie stories?

This is... thoroughly mediocre.

first chapter is a bit rushed, but i will give it the benefit of the doubt!

10/10 10/10 me like me like

lol ron

please please please don't get mad at me but question:Twilight really doesn't have a "personal" room 'cause she shares a room with Spike(ssssoooooo where was Spikes bed? outside the room or..?)
...okay so there is a difference between Twilight's bedroom in Season 1 through 4 look and see
Season(i think 3 and 4)
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Season 1-2(or also 3)
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Notice:the doorway across Twi's bedroom is now under