When Zecora, a zebra spy, informs the Emperor of Equestria in a potential losing war against the Caribou; he sets his sights for Equestria in hopes of saving what's left of it.
I LOVED IT, that sea battle was great and how you described the unknown ship with all different species as it's crew was great, I can't wait to see what happens next chapter.
Your Welcome Red, I can't wait to see how Shockers Flag ship will stand up to the Caribou Sea Battleships and any of the Caribou Air Battleships too. Of course with their weapons they should be more then a match for the Caribou after all.
"Well I have not been to Roam so once I saw how large it was compared to Canterlot I was quite shocked at the sight of it, maybe I should have a secondary part of Canterlot start being built at the base of Mt. Canterhorn."
Oh Great, now we have the Princesses breaking the fourth wall, CURSE YOU PINKIE PIE, CURSE YOU! But Celestia is right about the size of the City, that is MASSIVE when you compare it to NYC.
Hope you guys like the newest update to my story. Next chapter will come soon.
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I LOVED IT, that sea battle was great and how you described the unknown ship with all different species as it's crew was great, I can't wait to see what happens next chapter.
hmm... no offense, but you could leave the chapters to stay in editing for a few extra hours. there are enough errors here that i think it is needed.
oh, and also:
How huge is the city?!
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Thanks Dusk.
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Your Welcome Red, I can't wait to see how Shockers Flag ship will stand up to the Caribou Sea Battleships and any of the Caribou Air Battleships too. Of course with their weapons they should be more then a match for the Caribou after all.
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Huge enough to equal twice the size of New York City.
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"Well I have not been to Roam so once I saw how large it was compared to Canterlot I was quite shocked at the sight of it, maybe I should have a secondary part of Canterlot start being built at the base of Mt. Canterhorn."
Oh Great, now we have the Princesses breaking the fourth wall, CURSE YOU PINKIE PIE, CURSE YOU!
But Celestia is right about the size of the City, that is MASSIVE when you compare it to NYC.
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Yeah, it is.