It was only a fight. It was never supposed to turn out like this. She just needed a couple of hours of peace and now Luna find herself locked up in a basement
8327755 There are acceptable mistakes and there are unacceptable mistakes, guess which category poor grammar fits into. There's also a difference between stretching a character's traits or changing them for the sake of storytelling, and having extremely poor, one-dimensional or even non-existent characterization. But since we are already playing the "just an opinion" and the back-patting games it would be a complete waste of time to deeply explain these concepts, their differences and how to execute them in a reader-satisfactory way. No "it's fanfiction" is not an excuse either, many great classics of literature have come from fanfiction from other, older, classics (Tolkien's works were a fanfiction of bible books with British/Scot folk tales mixed in, Lewis' Narnia was a fanfiction of Lord of the Rings, all of Disney's classics are retellings of the Grimm's own take on some old Germanic fairy tales) and even in this webpage you can find amazing works of art from people who have actually done their proper amount of research and analysis. Of course, these people didn't start writing literary masterpieces right away; but since their early drafts -messy as they may be - you could tell they were actually invested in the concept of writing fiction, be it as profession or just a hobby.
I don't mean to be a rusher but is the next part still coming out? I am just wondering if this is a canceled project or if the next part is just taking a while.
8413881 It's taking a little longer. I have school and life problems, so it been hard. Don't worry. It's not cancel. One thing you need to know about me is that I never start a story unless I know for sure I will finish it.
I know it been forever since a update. Life and school have kept me busy. But I will be able to work on it this weekend. Hopefully next week there will be a new chapter.
8327755
There are acceptable mistakes and there are unacceptable mistakes, guess which category poor grammar fits into.
There's also a difference between stretching a character's traits or changing them for the sake of storytelling, and having extremely poor, one-dimensional or even non-existent characterization.
But since we are already playing the "just an opinion" and the back-patting games it would be a complete waste of time to deeply explain these concepts, their differences and how to execute them in a reader-satisfactory way.
No "it's fanfiction" is not an excuse either, many great classics of literature have come from fanfiction from other, older, classics (Tolkien's works were a fanfiction of bible books with British/Scot folk tales mixed in, Lewis' Narnia was a fanfiction of Lord of the Rings, all of Disney's classics are retellings of the Grimm's own take on some old Germanic fairy tales) and even in this webpage you can find amazing works of art from people who have actually done their proper amount of research and analysis. Of course, these people didn't start writing literary masterpieces right away; but since their early drafts -messy as they may be - you could tell they were actually invested in the concept of writing fiction, be it as profession or just a hobby.
I don't care what anyone thinks. I love it.
I love this story. Like you have no clue, can't wait to get the next chapter.
8352212 Thanks for the kind words on our story!
8358098 Thanks for the kind words on our story!
I don't mean to be a rusher but is the next part still coming out? I am just wondering if this is a canceled project or if the next part is just taking a while.
8413881
It's taking a little longer. I have school and life problems, so it been hard. Don't worry. It's not cancel. One thing you need to know about me is that I never start a story unless I know for sure I will finish it.
I know it been forever since a update. Life and school have kept me busy. But I will be able to work on it this weekend. Hopefully next week there will be a new chapter.