It was only a fight. It was never supposed to turn out like this. She just needed a couple of hours of peace and now Luna find herself locked up in a basement
9308952 The description caught my eye because it reminded me of something I'd written in the past, which made me want to read the story to see how it stacked up against mine.
9309653 It was decently written, though fell flat in a number of areas. I like the concept of the story, and it would've been better if things were more fleshed out rather than for the sake of
This story has a similar theme to the one I wrote some time back.
I had a read just to see how it was, but it seems as though it was done for the sake of the brutality than anything.
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What does that mean? Not trying to sound rude. Just wondering.
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The description caught my eye because it reminded me of something I'd written in the past, which made me want to read the story to see how it stacked up against mine.
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Okay. Did it?
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It was decently written, though fell flat in a number of areas. I like the concept of the story, and it would've been better if things were more fleshed out rather than for the sake of
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Okay. I see. Like how exactly?
I like this story. Its not perfect but I like it.
So far I like it. I hope you continue this
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I took in your advice and have been fixing up the story.