I'm torn away from my home, and warped into someone unrecognisable, with powers to match. All because of a car accident that Tia tried to save me from. Discord however, thought he was helping when he decided to let me have a Power Fantasy.
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Dis gonna be good! Awesome new chapter!!
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You know what’s coming next.
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Hehe. Yes I do
8351501
Nice profile pic
*clears throat* i believe the phrase our poor dimensionally/bodily misplaced friend was looking for when he was trying to describe himself was "I look like the crypt keeper"
8351556
Not a bad analogy.
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Thanks
Meh.
...Okay, I'm sorta confused. Is this some AU where Pinkie is NOT one of the Elements of Harmony? One where they don't exist? Does she think of her Pinkamena self and her Pinkie self as different ponies? Because her explanation on her relationship with Twilight and the others REALLY confused me.
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This is an AU where she’s not one of the Elements of Harmony. Sorry if that was confusing.
but I thought that if you could think about something hopeful, you would not be so sad.”
“I know, but I want it.” She whined.
I think you meant this rather than that.
These two very small mistakes were present, but overall a good chapter that deals with fate and destiny, and someone meant for a specific place.
Also I'm liking this whole A.U. thing you've got going here.
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Thanks for catching those. I’m glad you like it. I had this planned to be an A.U. from the start. I have plans for other characters too. Next chapter is going to have clop, (made that kinda obvious) however I also want to get into Pinkamena’s backstory and establish the universe that this is set in a bit
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Can't wait for your next release.
Also, you're welcome.
8352080
I’m glad someone is
8352086
a master piece like the rest my friend. well done. this made me cry a bit.
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If she isn't laughter, then who takes her place? And, if she isn't an element and thus important, how did she get close enough to Celestia for her to talk about Jared?
Or is all that stuff still up in the air?
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You will find out who the Element of Laughter is in the next chapter. As the getting close to Celestia, it was less that and more refusing to leave Jared’s side after he first showed up. That and she was the closest to him after Twilight blasted him, and thus came along after Celestia came to retrieve him.
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I’m sorry I made you cry.
8352543
Ah, forgot that he just showed up in the middle of town like that
8352546
don't be sorry. I'm glad I cried. it shows how good of a job you did at making this scene hit home.
8352551
Yep, easy thing to forget because the intro is meant to be confusing.
8352555
Well, good I guess.
8352555
I hope the chapter flowed okay, Nothing was too jarring was it?
8352561
I thought it flowed perfectly. I could follow everything. the only thing I didn't get was why the nurse started chewing Cadence out after Jared and Pinkie went into the bathroom.
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Think about it, an Alicorn, the Princess of Love no less, was off in her own world while this guy is weeping and is unresponsive to outside stimuli, I.E. in the middle of a breakdown. Cadence didn’t do a thing while this was happening.
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Ah, now I see. but she did do something. She let true love heal what it needed to heal. She knew Pinkie was in love with Jared and that she was the best one for the job. just my thoughts.
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That probably will be her excuse.
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Also she's the princess of love, not counseler's
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True, but she was still there to make sure he’s okay. At least that’ll be what I say she was there for.
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true.
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Tia’s busy, so she sends Cadence to check on him. What does she do? Go into a logic puzzle while his mind breaks. That’ll be interesting to see what happens after the next chapter. Because next chapter is sexy times followed by some Pinkamena backstory, life in Ponyville, and a little recent history.
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I noticed Pinkamena isn't part of the Mane 6 in this... that threw me for a loop. I was not expecting that in the slightest.
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Good.
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I'm curious who is the one the one you switched her with. I've got an Idea but knowing you it not the right idea.
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Vinyl Scratch
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your gonna have to explain that one,
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Consider Laughter as Joy or Hope. What does a DJ do with her music?
8352655
now that makes sense. like I said before I had an idea, and it wasn't the right one.
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Well, what’s your idea?
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I was thinking either Derpy, or Cherilee
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Derpy’s Kindness.
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are the cannon mane 6 in there at all or did you switched the whole crew minus Twilight? cause if you did .... You have more guts then me, good job. ;)
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Ill tell you in a PM
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Great work keep it up
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Please PM me as well, I was confused in the moment Pinkie said that Twilight had "5 other friends" (The Element Bearers most likely) and are known as the M6. And if there are others, is Pinkie still friends with the "known" bearers or not, if not with Twilight? So that I have an idea with what I'm dealing here!
PS: Very enjoyable chapter.
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Will do
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Thanks, can wait to see how many "true friends" Pinkie even has besides Jered. Fluttershy is always a choice where nothing could go wrong (if you can get through her shyness. Now that she isn't even a bearer she most likely won't learn her "assertive" lessons in life and remain more or less a doormat).
I'm really intrested in this story and can't wait for the next chapter
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Well cool I’m glad. I’ve got a couple one-shots to write before the next chapter though.