and here's the bastardous peppy i've grown to love/hate...
next thing we know you'll write an incredibly bad story where twilight develops Lima syndrome for Nightmare after she's captured and becomes her lesbian lover! But that's just ridiculous, no one could ever come up with an idea that horrific could they...
I, for one, think that it would be possible for twilight to remove some of the air friction somehow, or perhaps transfer her own strength into RD to keep her speed up. I mean, what's Twilight gonna do with all that energy? just sit and worry, that's what.
1068849 Luna screwing around with Twi would just be cruel especially after what happened between her and chrys and I'm not quite sure how I'd have Chrys screw with Twi. She doesn't want to hurt her, after all. Plus, this was never meant to go in that direction anyhoof.
I hope that's not the case. I'm hoping that she's just love starved... Because if not, it seems very off canon to me. But theb again, you have the AU tag.
In any case, looking foward to a HAPPY (hint hint) ending.
I haven't read the entire chapter but how you manipulated the emotional roller coster was perfect. My first fanfic doesn't have that good of a set up. Could you grace me by reviewing it. I sound desperate becouse I am. I need to learn how to manipulate my story like you do. I completely understand if you don't want to and you definatily don't have to. oh and you got the respect you lost back.
Chrysalis:It all starts with this…a jewel containing the ultimate power
Luna: That's the…Element of Harmony !! Now I know what's going on!The Elements has mistaken me for the likes of you! So, where do you think you’re going with that Element? Say something! You fake Pony!
In my Headcannon is Chrysalis is The Ultimate Life Form in Mlp Universe,Just Saying
OH MY GOD! This story has so much detail, and so much heart-wrenching sadness. I LOVE IT, but I feel sad.
Third.
This story has taken a drastic change in direction since it started, which I consider a good thing.
THEY MUST SAVE HER, LUNA DAMN IT! ...I mean, looking forward to the next chapter!
and here's the bastardous peppy i've grown to love/hate...
next thing we know you'll write an incredibly bad story where twilight develops Lima syndrome for Nightmare after she's captured and becomes her lesbian lover! But that's just ridiculous, no one could ever come up with an idea that horrific could they...
Right...? C'mon guys don't joke with me here...
I think we can safely say-
Shit has hit the fan.
I, for one, think that it would be possible for twilight to remove some of the air friction somehow, or perhaps transfer her own strength into RD to keep her speed up. I mean, what's Twilight gonna do with all that energy? just sit and worry, that's what.
Well, that couldn't last forever. Someone was bound to find out.
Great chapter, I'm really looking forward to the next one.
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I can totally see that, but one would hope that they would remember that high stress levels can induce miscarriages....
1066806 Watchu mean, exactly?
1066080 She's way too frantic to think of stuff like that (Spike had to think of the air ballon thing)
1065079 Good..... Goooooooood.....
1068849 Luna screwing around with Twi would just be cruel especially after what happened between her and chrys and I'm not quite sure how I'd have Chrys screw with Twi. She doesn't want to hurt her, after all. Plus, this was never meant to go in that direction anyhoof.
Execution?
I hope that's not the case. I'm hoping that she's just love starved... Because if not, it seems very off canon to me. But theb again, you have the AU tag.
In any case, looking foward to a HAPPY (hint hint) ending.
I haven't read the entire chapter but how you manipulated the emotional roller coster was perfect. My first fanfic doesn't have that good of a set up. Could you grace me by reviewing it. I sound desperate becouse I am. I need to learn how to manipulate my story like you do.
I completely understand if you don't want to and you definatily don't have to.
oh and you got the respect you lost back.
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Chrysalis:It all starts with this…a jewel containing the ultimate power
Luna: That's the…Element of Harmony !! Now I know what's going on!The Elements has mistaken me for the likes of you! So, where do you think you’re going with that Element? Say something! You fake Pony!
In my Headcannon is Chrysalis is The Ultimate Life Form in Mlp Universe,Just Saying
Easy, Chrysalis is on deathro