Twilight Sparkle and Rainbow Dash woke up. They got ready to go to the Crystal Empire they went outside flying together to the train station when they got there, their friends said, "Surprise!"
Pinkie Pie's cannon blew up, "Hey, Twilight and Rainbow Dash I can't wait until you tell us how fun your honeymoon is when you guys get back,” with a really big smile on her face.
"Well, Pinkie we'll be just staying at the Crystal Empire for just 2 days,” Twilight said.
"Yeah me and Twilight need some time together just by ourselves,” Rainbow Dash said, Twilight nodded her head.
Pinkie Pie was holding a present, "Here you go don't open it until your on the train, ok?"
"Ok, well that's our train come on, Dashie! Bye guys!" Twilight said.
"Bye!" Everypony said.
"So Dashie, I can't wait until we are at the Crystal Empire.” Twilight said.
"Yeah me too!" Rainbow Dash replied, looking out of the window.
Twilight Sparkle opened the present a mini cannon was in side it exploded with party strings, "Oh, Pinkie,” laughing.
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What does periods mean pinkie
Sorry I'm from Australia
Oh I get it commas and full stops
I don't understand number 6
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Like this.
Pinkie dropped her glass, trembling in fear. "Y-you g-guys are fr-from tar-taruraus?!"
The two vampires nodded. They backed Pinkie up, preparing to drink every ounce of blood from her body.
"We can give you two options, Pinkie. One, you let us kill you. Or two, let us turn you into one of us and serve us. The choice is yours."
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Sorry about that. I get caught up in my vampire stories. Even though I made that one up.....
I will be back soon
That's ok I always forgive you