Daybreaker was nothing more than a dark memory built with fear and worry. A disgusting monster unfit to exist in the real world and too shameful for a princess to understand. But what if she was given the chance to live?
It was at that point Nick came back downstairs and walked in on Daybreaker setting his little in his bed and putting a blanket over him.
Forgot brother.
I'm loving this so far. Rather adorable and comedic. Though I would like to see the mother's reaction to, what at first glance, looks like a horse straight outta the bowels of hell. Hellhorse. Hellpony. Whatever.
8286954 Considering I've been trying to get back into writing without an editor, I try to get all the practice I can get. It's almost a guilty pleasure to find an errant mistake and be one step closer the grammatical perfection. Or maybe I'm just weird.
interesting this seems like a reverse version of help my lonely soul the nightmare-prologue by Zamairiac and since i loved that story i keep a eye on this
The Solar empress apparently enjoys her newfound friends, that's precious.
I shall quote "MORE"
This is sad how Daybreaker doesn't know the simplest things. Being suppressed all the time left a big mark on her.
Did you mean to add wipeing in that sentence
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Fixed it.
I am such an idiot.
Forgot brother.
I'm loving this so far. Rather adorable and comedic. Though I would like to see the mother's reaction to, what at first glance, looks like a horse straight outta the bowels of hell. Hellhorse. Hellpony. Whatever.
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Fixed it.
Yay! New chapter hype!
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Wow, you guys are fast. Thank you both, all help is welcome!
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Yeah I have nothing better to do with my life
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Considering I've been trying to get back into writing without an editor, I try to get all the practice I can get. It's almost a guilty pleasure to find an errant mistake and be one step closer the grammatical perfection. Or maybe I'm just weird.
"Perhaps I could conquer this primitive world. . ."
Just wait and see
This story is so good! I look forward to more of it.
Small error:
I think you forgot 'don't' there. Unless he's telling his brother it's okay to take that tone with him.
Also, I am so happy that you use ellipsis right.
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I just finished the latest chapter of Her Kind Savage. It's the next thing on my list.
She is so adorable! ><
interesting this seems like a reverse version of help my lonely soul the nightmare-prologue by Zamairiac and since i loved that story i keep a eye on this
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It is an inspiration for this story. Zamairiac inspired me to write so credit goes to him.
When Daybreaker asks if poison exists why does he lie to her and say no?