It has been 6 months since their time at Camp Everfree, unfortunately a new threat appears, one much more dangerous than anything they have ever faced.
This is too rushed (from peace to death in less than two thousand words) and there isn't enough details from the battles to enjoy them, also some parts of the story feels forced.
Interesting premise though. I'll keep a watch to see where this goes.
8254729 The fight scenes were more to set up the power disparity than anything else. Also I hope to expand on some of the stuff in future chapters, I'm glad for the feedback.
This is too rushed (from peace to death in less than two thousand words) and there isn't enough details from the battles to enjoy them, also some parts of the story feels forced.
Interesting premise though. I'll keep a watch to see where this goes.
8254729
The fight scenes were more to set up the power disparity than anything else. Also I hope to expand on some of the stuff in future chapters, I'm glad for the feedback.
8254741
Don't worry about it, glad to be of help and I wish you for success.