Walter was a cosplaying as Volthoom when he saw a perfect replica of the Travel Lantern and the Phantom Ring for sale in a convention. The owner of the stall seemed to be cosplaying as the Merchant from Resident Evil 4. This is a displaced story.
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This fic suffers from all the problems that have, and will continue to affect displacement fics.
A completely brokenly op main character, who honestly doesn't have any point of being a displacement other than being a lazy self insert.
Complete and utter canon rape.
No one acting even remotely in character, and spending their entire time mentionimg how "Oh so godly great the self insert is!" And shit of that caliber.
It is indicative of why all displacement fics are just bad.
This fic is well written I will give that ground and there are plenty of nice and refreshing moments.
Things are getting tense. Nice update!
celestia fucked up and now the world is paying for it. Why does this keep popping up in stories. self answer. because she's not a perfect being and fucks up sometimes.
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If you don't like this story why did you read this far into it?
I love this story can’t wait for the next chapter
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Never said I didn't like it.
I merely said that it is indicitive of the massive problems that literally every displaced fic has.
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It's to be expected since you are literally just using the power set of a already established character and giving the personality of a OC. Still, that's why fiction exist, after all, every fictional character is technically a OC that came from the minds of their author, it just so happened that their stories became profitable and were sold or were simply left in the myriad of stories that exist out there. Fan fact, most light novel authors started as fanfic writers.
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Wow this took awhile
It lives
Thank god
You just got to love how they seem to forget that voltam is responsible for the deaths of two alicorn royalty yeah he might have been mind-controlled but still his responsibility. Cadenza had a legit reason to hate changelings until proven otherwise they maliciously kidnapped her and left her starving in a cave. Kidnapping is a crime kidnapping royalty is worse. A visiting ruler is insulted by the guards that were sent to meet up and then have the gall to complain when one of their retinue attacks them .... last time i checked wars have been started for less. I hope voltom gets a title to ... like the regicide king or something. Dont get me wrong the flutter ponies are victims but celestia and luna are victims by voltom. I hope he does call otsutsuki a neutral party thatll slap both their shits for being stupid might be necessary.
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Yeah, just busy IRL with studies and work.
Yay! A new chapter!
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did you forget that Cadenza almost kill guy and that she only in jail until she get pick up .
celestia committed genocide, Desertification their land,ran away ,
hide the fact ,did not take responsibility for her action,did not check for survivors at any point, sealed away voltam, try to usurp the throne of Amorea and annexed territories of Crystal Empire,and left Crystal Empire under Sombra
You are underestimating the mess she created
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Yah a traumatized victim seeing one of her attackers next to a innocent mare .... you gotta wonder why she attacked. Remember she didn't know they were married it was unfortunate but with the changelings playing info secret squirrel them arriving to find your enemies in a pony town they came to save. The changelings handled cadance wrong during the wedding. So should we be fair if cadance is locked up for assault should chrysalis be extradited to equestria to face charges ... shes guilty of assault kidnapping and rape. They also attacked innocent ponies during the invasion to cause a distraction so all involved should face crimes of assault will they be extradited ... just so they could get voltoms ring. As for celestia destroying flutter valley .. yep guilty as charged her hatred of voltom killing her parents and Luna corruption blinded her and she should face charges .... voltoms getting celestias parents killed by getting himself possessed by umbrum and windigos because he used emotion based energy on emotion energy vores... yep guilty as charged should he be charged ... yes accidental homicide is a crime or is it regicide. She's guilty of covering up her genocide but due to guilt left enough info so people knew they existed but the changelings are guilty of covering up his regicide which no one talks about or convienently forgets. Gods can do no wrong. Both sides are blind and i hope oksukski slaps both their shits. Also she assumed he was dead she didnt seal voltom she sealed his ring so no one could get it. To bad he regenerates from the ring and only the flutterponies knew. As for amore she was a shattered statue in other words dead ... cadance is a alicorn she was expected to take a dead queens throne. It was quite a shock I bet to find her alive that plan wasn't gonna happen. Sombra himself banished the crystal empire she didnt let him it was she couldnt stop him theirs a difference. Volty didn't stop him either.
The reason i have a problem is voltoms shit don't stink he does no wrong he could lay waste to the equestrians and he'd justify it to himself as their evil it's justified. He and the changelings are not held responsible for their actions theirs no ..... fairness. Not every equestrians a racist not every changelings not.
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Not sure about the rape part though, in my mind, Chrysalis was impersonating Cadence but she didn't force herself on him, she just didn't refuse his advances. Also, it's not like Volthoom can do no wrong he just doesn't care for anything aside from the wellbeing of his protection, plus he can be rather volatile since he uses pure and raw emotions as his power source.
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It's sooooooo rape dude .... if she was in her body would shining of screwed her ... he was screwing cadance not chrysalis. She used magic to take on her appearance. His consent was under false pretense. Yah chrysalis can't claim rape she knowingly consented. It's like loving one of two twin sisters you love one but hate the other .... is it consent if they switch and he doesn't know.
So his sense of right and wrong is biased and unethical punish those who commit crimes against them but turn a blind eye to his own peoples crimes ... all hail Ainz Ooal Gown. Raw emotions is what lead the original voltom to madness since hes not chaoticaly insane he can reason right from wrong. Like i said theirs no fairness. It's your story so write it how you want ... I just don't like him as a person/character ... to me he's just as much a criminal as celestia. The storys pretty good so far story wise. You definitely worked on fleshing out the changelings. Bringing in displaced I feel is a good move. Hymn ... maybe a displaced protagonist to pit him against especially since he has a army.
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Two things:
1) That's actually a debate in many countries when it comes to their laws regarding rape, to this day some of them are still being reviewed.
2)
Indeed.
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Yah we all know which of those countries are ...they say still being reviewed it means changing it is unfavorable to men because women are second class citizens and to admit it's a crime would give them too many rights or make the men accountable. Don't get me wrong the opposite could happen... men can't be raped ... erection is consent ... what bullshit ... erection is not consent.
Her using magic to assume cadance form and voice is manipulation. If she changed back to her form in the middle of the act .... would he have kept going .... or would he have screamed out in terror and tried to fight her... thats the difference between consent and no consent.
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Let say cadance was right ,she still care more about beating the changelings then helping the mare .I mean she left mare alone in a town full with changelings.
So fact other keep records mean she allowed it rather that she fail to wipe all records in the eyes of other for all they know, the king and queen die in the fight against Sombra and the Crystal Empire gone. She got rid of her sister then later she left and came back later with voltom's ring after
flutter valley was nuke (the home of voltom ).then she say it was a meteorite that did it one that nobody saw .she then Damnatio memoriae her Family, flutter, and voltom. The truth is too unbelievable.
You still want to talk about regicide when she did the same and more to flutter.
Why place a foreign ruler in crystal Empire at all.it still came off as a take over
voltoms only care about those under his care he did kill who know how many for harm the flutter. He more of end just the mean type of guy.
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Celestias guilty as f**k don't get me wrong ... But so is voltom yet everyone seems to forget or glass over the fact that he caused the death of her parents ... her royal parents ...which led to her seeking out voltom to destroy him. Yes we know he didnt intend to get snacked on by the umbrum and wendigos but accidentally killing someone is still killing someone. I don't even recall him showing remorse over it ... it might be in the story ... But I don't recall it. If anything him almost destroying everything ... which everyone convienently forgot .... should've put the fear of ... god ... haha ... into everyone. Her parents sacrifice stopped him going ... critical. She could've put that in the books ... voltom royalslayer ... so no one would forget him but she didn't.
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Actually, in one of of the most famous cases a woman was accused of raping another woman.
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If you want to go by technicality, plus he didn't have time to regret what he did before being sealed since from his perspective he was pushed into the Void, returned, got beaten and sealed.
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You not wrong, but why would anyone remember it when she one who make sure that no one would remember it. Volthoom already got punishment with 1000 year in ring and genocide what else can he do make up for it.
he did feel responsible for their deaths and thankfully for being stop. which why got a flesh body to prevent it from happening again. So is that remorse or not.
What do you want happen ?
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I dont want anything to happen to him ... they both fd up. They both feel guilty but it happened ...at the time celestia was a solo ruler if she stepped down or confessed the nobility wouldve tore equestria apart saying she was unfit to rule ... greedy racists. Now that voltoms back and her sisters their to take her place maybe the changlings will get some justice. I just hate how hes getting a clean history freebie ... no ones saying anything about him but there all over celestia. His imprisonment... thou unintentional.... was acceptable punishment it couldve been worse.. if she knew he regenerated she probably wouldve tried to destroy the ring as soon as she had it. He got lucky. But celestia does need some kinda punishment... a confession as a minimum ... loss of princesshood.... till she makes restitution in some way to the flutterponies. Rebuild fluttervalley... something.
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it was better than canon Volthoom, he spend 13 billion years inside a box in total darkness, known as the Chamber of Shadows, unable to either sleep or die only to be moved to a cell to be experimented on before escaping, which led to the "Wrath of the First Lantern" arc involving him and the Third Army created by the Maltusians/Oans.
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Yep all genders. Im beating a dead horse ill stop. For all i know 10 chapters from now cadance and shining form a herd with chrysalis and have more kids between them. Flurry will have siblings. She would technically allready be related to voltom. Like cell from dbz they both have a bit of shining and cadance in them. Hymn if he sleeps with cadance would that be incest or masturbation being part her after all.....lol.
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1000 years is good thou ... it wasnt intentionally done after all. But he also couldnt get off scott free. I think since celestia killed so many flutterponies their should be some comeuppance.... Maybe shed consent to mother a new royal changling....(from the impression i get she wouldn't say no to voltom) to make a new hive. Thatll be centralized in equestria.
More please
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Working on it. It going slowly since I write mostly on the weekends.
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Ok then thanks
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Is probably be long if i am guess cause to forgive celestia to what she did to him
Is it almost finished
Yah kazuki my favourite displaced